Martial God Supreme

Along the way, Lin Fei's image has been deeply rooted in people's hearts. The beginning and middle of the novel are quite exciting. As his identity and martial arts improve step by step, he is disconnected from all the previous characters. In the large number of chapters of Breaking Through the Chaos God, there are no characters with distinctive personalities, which makes it seem procedural and monotonous. Only one difficult word is highlighted, and the martial arts routines of elite professionals are no longer visible after repeated flipping. It is a subjective and vague description that cannot capture the readers' hearts. If I didn't want to know Lin Fei's final outcome, I really wouldn't be able to watch it anymore. For example: the description of the dark clan is very general and uncharacteristic, which is far worse than the previous description of the demon clan. The above humble opinions are for reference only. With such a long length, it's no wonder that there are no problems in planning, plotting, typical characters, typical personalities, and connections with each other. There is a huge gap between the two authors, as if they are not the same person. What is wonderful in the front makes the latter seem mediocre and dull. I have been reading this book for nearly a year, and I persisted because I like Lin Fei. I hope the author will not make plain talk in order to expand the length of the article. Subjective and fabricated things without roots will not attract readers!

I've watched it since the first year of junior high school and I still think it's good. The author keeps working hard and don't give up.

The author writes very well, I hope you will continue to update it and don't give up.

When bragging and spanking, the logic is confusing, and people will know that it is nonsense as soon as they hear it. The highest level of bragging should be that you believe it to be true. ——(After two or three hours of galloping, he ran about twenty miles) ——Is this a master? Ordinary people walking normally should have walked fifty or sixty miles in two or three hours. Who would believe this kind of bull?

The general understanding of this novel is that the protagonist has been targeted by everyone from the beginning. The human race is killing evil people in the front and trying to kill him in the back. There is also the fact that women, regardless of whether they know the protagonist or not, will always bring them with them to practice and work hard together. Half of what they get from the hard work will be given to each other. The protagonist of this book is simply the mortal enemy of the human race and has to protect the human race until the end.

To be honest, the writing of the novel can only be considered so-so. Compared with many fantasy novels, it can only be regarded as a medium to low level. What is serious is that the author's content has too many sentences that are not fluent, and readers need to sort it out by themselves. Is it because the author has limited skills, is he careless, or does he disrespect literature and readers too much? A good author respects literature and readers. It's better to check carefully before publishing. Please think twice!

The author is not simple... Self-report

The author initially introduced the book that the protagonists were Lin Fei and Wu Min, but after chapter 1500, the protagonist Wu Min did not appear at all. Is he still the protagonist? In addition, this book has many typos, some plots are not logically rigorous, and the writing of the characters is also extremely loose.

The aura of the protagonist makes an ordinary person invincible in another world. It's awesome.

The writing is quite good, there aren't many mistakes, so I give it a five-star rating.