Invincible Poison God

Generally speaking, the beginning and ending don't match up. If the idea is well done, it can be a good work.

Well written

The introduction at the beginning is good, but it doesn't inject emotion into it, and it gets cold too quickly. After rebirth, I was still a white-eyed wolf and had many failures. Not to mention, time is money.

The ending is too hasty and anticlimactic

It's boring to be so ungrateful at the beginning and treat the old man like this after three years of raising him.

What the hell are you writing? The main character is a Madonna + a dog licker. She doesn't have the decisiveness of a strong man to kill. She shows mercy when she encounters her enemies, and she has a lot of mercy.