Emperor's Beloved Concubine, Please Take It Easy

In fact, when I was reading this book, I skipped a lot of things in the middle, but it still interfered with my reading of the subsequent content. Especially when I saw the scene in the back where the heroine and the hero break up, I was really afraid that the two of them would part ways. Fortunately, the heroine and heroine reconciled later, otherwise my heart would be broken. Moreover, the hero is really cruel to himself. He knows that the heroine's "little bitch" is poisonous, but he still holds it to his heart. I really admire him. And I look forward to the scene where the hero and heroine get married when the war is over. The heroine is definitely the happiest person. Moreover, according to the content of the novel, the hero and heroine are good-looking, so their children must also be very good-looking, and their family will definitely be very happy. Ah! Thinking of that scene, I have only one thing to say to the author: update soon! Update soon! Update soon! Say important things three times! ! !

I was attracted by the introduction, and after reading it, I found that the author wrote it with too much detail, and the foreshadowing was also very good. The female protagonist is the kind of person who pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, which is cute, and the male protagonist is very strong and doting, but! Although it is a pet story, there are shards of glass in it. The male protagonist is going to chase his wife into the crematorium! I want to know what choice the male protagonist will make between Jiangshan and beauty?

Well written but updates are too slow

I have been reading novels for 7 years, and this book is the only one that I read carefully from beginning to end and follow up on it carefully. The author combines love, time travel, and fantasy without any sense of contradiction. In particular, the inner world of the characters is vividly presented. Each character in the book has its own vivid characteristics. Especially the two little pets ~ Wanziqianhong and Baibai. Every time I see them, I can imagine the two little pets. I think the author must have a cat as cute as Baibai at home. I hope the war will end as soon as possible and there will be chapters where the hero and heroine go to the Blue Moon or get married🉑️! I also particularly enjoyed watching the parts between Emperor Xin and Lan Li. The male and female protagonists are destined to live forever! I like the male and female protagonists, I like Wanziqianhong and Baibai, please come on, author~ Please update soon🤩

The author's writing style is really good. This is the best ancient novel I have ever read. I didn't like it before but now I like it because of the details. My heart dropped when I saw the prince walking over like this, so I quickly got on the heroine and left. I also knew that Shang Liangyue was checking the terrain in order to be able to memorize the route smoothly. Another thing is that the heroine is not a saint. So is Lan Lin going to draw a modern identity or an ancient identity?

This book is written with some random thoughts! Like an old lady's foot-binding!

Today I was discussing online novels with my friends, and I happened to see that there is a book review function here, so I wrote a book review on a whim. The story structure and character setting of this book are quite good, and the protagonist's early stage survival with his weak body relying on his own wisdom and charm is somewhat inspiring. Although two super cheats, a cat and a snake, were forcibly arranged in the mid-term (a phoenix, a suzaku, etc. Can make a dragon, tiger, and phoenix conference), the hardships that the protagonist has to go through are not particularly different. There is no cliché of Internet pretending to be airy every second, and the protagonist is still a normal human being. At the same time, normal and reasonable twists and turns are maintained in the development of the storyline, making the story highly readable. The first one was a positive comment, but I will be less polite later. (Of course, all opinions are only for evaluation of this book. If they involve the author or other readers, please do not regard them as personal attacks) Some people say that the author's writing style is very good, but I personally think otherwise. ① There are considerable deficiencies in the use of sentence segmentation, paragraphing, and punctuation marks in this book. One or two sentences in a paragraph, it takes more than a dozen paragraphs to explain an action or a small thing. Perhaps the author's purpose is to make it as easy to read as possible to achieve a clear explanation. However, such segmentation cannot achieve this expectation. At the end of each chapter, there are basically "Suddenly!" "Xxx, say." "However." Then there is nothing more. Visually, the author's purpose is to imitate "predict what will happen next, please listen to the breakdown next time" to increase the suspense of the story and arouse the reader's desire to read the next chapter. However, this method of forcibly splitting a complete sentence into two chapters is very, very, very low-level. This not only destroys the integrity of the article, but also lowers the style of the entire book. A good story, a good novel, is so captivating that readers will unconsciously want to keep reading instead of relying on the forcibly disconnected text. On the contrary, if your story is not good, then it will be useless no matter how hard you use it. (To give a small example here, the early dozens of chapters and tens of thousands of words of "Fighting Swordsman in the Snow" by "The Princes" are very boring, and it is difficult for people to have the desire to read it. However, many people read the whole book with gusto after struggling back and forth five or six times. Some even go back and read it again from the beginning several times after reading it. A good story has no shortage of readers.) ②Some people say that this article is the best classical Chinese novel he or she has ever read. Perhaps in order to reflect the atmosphere or cater to the readers, the author tried to avoid modern daily spoken language in terms of wording, and may have used the line style of palace dramas with the Qing Dynasty palace as the background. There is no distinction between good and bad. Every era has its own language characteristics, let alone in fictional online novels. What I want to say is: the author's vocabulary is actually not very big. If you count a little, you will find that words like "now", "not yet", "what to do", "such", "that" and "extremely" appear repeatedly very frequently, as if these words are beads and the article is a necklace stringing these beads together with a rope. Certain words and words appear repeatedly. If they do not have a special function and require special emphasis, then there are no words available. ③The content is too lengthy with irrelevant or unimportant details. The author may be a cat lover. Since the protagonist followed the emperor's uncle to the palace to meet his parents, there have been more and more parts about cats, and almost one chapter has been devoted to cats. This feels a bit overwhelming. I recently wrote about the war chapter, in which the time spent and the strength of the army are very, very, very "clear". In almost every chapter, I have to ask the time several times and recalculate the number of troops. To be honest, this elementary school student counting feeling is a bit redundant. Too many lengthy and repetitive descriptions of irrelevant or unimportant details gave me the impression that the book was trying to fill up the word count. It made me guess that the author actually didn't have enough ink at the moment and had nothing to write. In addition, let's talk about another issue where a supporting role or an important function is suddenly missing. Here are a few examples: ①The escort Lan Lin gave to the protagonist is still in the inn away from Lanzhou. Lan Lin sent him to protect the protagonist, but the protagonist asked him to go to the inn to settle down and then nothing happened. Looking at the previous battle records, this person's strength should be close to that of the emperor's uncle. With a guard of this level, even if the protagonist rushes to Lizhou without saying goodbye, it would be easy for him to find and follow the protagonist, and yet he is still sleeping leisurely away from Lanzhou? No matter whether it is ability or professionalism, he will not be allowed to degenerate like this. ②The protagonist's two maids are still squatting near the city gate. On the day when the Liaoyuan army attacked the city, the protagonist asked them to hide near the city gate and wait for an opportunity, but nothing happened. They were not seen when the war was over, they went to the mountains to collect medicine without them, and they were not even seen in the protagonist's daily life. Martial arts skills are in vain, cooking skills are in vain. After sitting on the bench in Huaiyou Valley, he showed his face and was relegated to the sidelines. ③What is the poison that the protagonist gave to Princess Nanga? And he was poisoned twice. I haven't seen an attack for so long, and I don't talk about the conditions for the attack. It seems that there is no such thing at all. It would be a bit far-fetched and embarrassing to say now that the poisoning was not successful. (Ye Miao: The poisoning was done twice, and once I ran in front of her and did it myself. You told me that it was not successful? Do I, the protagonist, have no face?!) Despite all the "frustration" above, I continue to pay attention to the development of the story in this book. As far as the current story structure and plot development are concerned, it is a good story. As a side note, I actually quite like cats.

Too procrastinating, deliberately trying to offend people's tastes, too procrastinating, deliberately trying to offend people's tastes, giving you a bad review

Finally found a place to comment. I love this novel so much that I wait impatiently for the author's updates every day. I have read so many novels and I think this is the best one. Like one.

I really like Yue Yue's pretending to be weak. It's really not too exciting to faint immediately, but I implore the author to update it quickly. It's not enough~