Chinese Blood Loyalty

This book is pretty good to read, of course, if two-thirds of the argumentative essays, critical essays, and narrations and flashbacks were removed, it would be considered a fine book. Purely personal opinion

Come on,

Nonsense. One chapter has half a chapter to make up the word count

The plot is well arranged, without the feeling of flowing chapters, and the author's writing style is also very good.

The last thing that should be done is to turn Huo Qubing into a woman. . .

Insulting a famous national hero, can you write Huo Qubing as a woman? Can you still go beyond the bottom line?

Personally, I think it's worth reading. The author's writing is good. I really got into it, and I was so angry at some of the plots. But the only shortcoming is that the champion Hou Huo Qubing is a woman. I don't mean to be disrespectful to my female compatriots. It is really the first time I see the champion Hou written in this way. I am a bit surprised. The plot of the later champion suddenly retiring was well arranged. After all, in history, champions died too early, leaving many people with regrets.

There is too much foreshadowing, too much explanation, and the story seems not coherent enough!

Too much nonsense that has nothing to do with the content

It's not impossible if you want to keep suspense. Can you leave suspense in Zhang Zhang? That's not suspense. If a pig's foot can travel through time, it's considered to have become an immortal. I think that if you just accept an apprentice for two or three months, you will become a super god. You ask the special forces if they agree first. There are also people who go to Shuzhong to find the Zhuo family. Is it a prince, just three people and three riders? Don't tell me how many soldiers followed to ambush the Liuyun Gang. Let me ask you, was there no no man's land from Chang'an to Chengdu in ancient times? No bandits? Oh, one pig's foot can give the strength of a regiment, and as for the part I just saw, do you think that a camp for 100,000 troops is a camping ground for 10 people? Is it just two steps to escape from the coach's tent? And the pig's feet and the princess in the back escaped with eight thousand men and horses chasing them. Do you think the Huns were the same as the Central Plains dynasty who didn't have much land to raise horses? Maximum one person per ride? Also, the guard ran away first and left the princess with the pig's feet. Is this what the guard dared to do? Oh, yes, it will be fine if you follow the pig's feet. If the guards are guarding you, it's 80% better. I've had enough. Now I write novels in eight-part essays!