Honor of Kings: Back to the Top

Talkative

So-so

Boring

What are you writing about? I once again saw someone typing to teach teammates skills during a team battle. . Brother, couldn't you just write the main character and turn on the voiceover? You have to type, why? In order to show the protagonist's slender fingers and fast hands?

Average

Nice

It sucked in the end

Wasted expression

There are some very important things missing, such as the rank of Supreme Star, or how to rank?

It's unfinished, the narrative is streamlined, the readers are not deeply involved in the story, lack of empathy, and there is almost no emotional drama. Thank you for reading it, and thank you for everyone who has finished reading it!