Qing Ben Is a Sinister Person: Please Take the Bait, Evil King

It's really good to read. I'm very picky when reading novels like this. It meets my needs for a novel very well. The plot is not too protracted, and the details are not written in advance. Although some of them may suddenly jump out, I can still connect them after a little thought. Anyway, it looks good! ! !

It's worth watching, the plot has twists and turns, and the story line develops clearly.

Woohoo, why do I always feel sorry for the male supporting actor? Qing Yeli "Living, no matter when or where, is not a good meaning." Xi Zhanchen "I like you, don't forget me, okay?"

The plot is messy, but it's well written. In the first few chapters, the supporting characters have more roles than the protagonists, so it takes a lot of time to understand.

Fine

Every time the heroine appears in a new place, she must describe her beauty. Mouth👄👃🏻Nose👀Eyes, eyebrows, clothes, these must be described one by one. Every time a new character appears, they must be described one by one. Regardless of their opinions, the supporting characters are all beauties and handsome guys. They must describe how beautiful this place is and how beautiful and charming it is. It seems that I have been reading it for fifty or sixty chapters. I really can't stand it until chapter one hundred. In fact, The plot of the story is okay. There is a story to tell.

This book doesn't have any major flaws, but it still has some shortcomings. ①The characters of the heroine's parents are not lovable and they are too romantic. ② It's a bad ending. Many things are not explained clearly. The life experience of the little monster, the male and female protagonists are not even married, and the heroine's grandfather does not seem to be dead, but still appears in a dream. The endings of various positive characters were not developed, and the story just started and ended abruptly. ③The plot and plot twists are sudden and there is no transition, which makes it inexplicable.

There are too many characters and it's confusing. I can't understand or remember clearly.

Personally, I think it would be more appropriate to replace the male protagonist with Ye Li. The so-called good men should not be let down, and good women should not be resented. The past and present life are closely related, and life and death are shared. Why does the author have to add a few men 23456? The heroine's aura of fraternity is so shining. Everyone likes her. Why? The plot is really not eye-catching. The content is probably the same. The relationships between the characters are many and confusing. There are many male sub-characters. What is it about? It's better to write it as a novel about women

What the hell! It's right for Xiaoye to be with the heroine. I'm speechless.