Peerless Mad Soldier

The first few chapters are okay, but the later ones are simply unreadable. They are too long-winded. Every trivial matter requires several chapters. They are all a routine, nothing new, and completely illogical. It is a waste of time.

A trivial matter requires at least three chapters, which is too much saliva.

Getting more and more boring

Well

There are too many typos and logic errors.

I have read dozens of chapters, and the more I read, the more ink I get.

It is difficult for the author to write so many typos.

It's so long-winded. What kind of novel can I write at this level?

Too many common sense errors

Complex plot