The Thief and the Silly Concubine

It's very interesting. I read book reviews before, and some people said that the heroine is very willful, but considering her past life, this is normal. The heroine has always been a person in her previous life, and will not trust anyone except herself. In her previous life, she felt like a machine, a machine that helps organize killings. Although she has relatives after time travel, I feel that there is a gap between them. After getting together with the male protagonist, she began to change, acting coquettishly with her grandfather, and thinking about others. The male protagonist is the heroine's salvation.

It's good to read. I like books with fewer chapters. That way doesn't hurt me and makes me feel at ease. Come on author, wait for the new work. Remember to have fewer chapters. How sweet. I will keep chasing you.

I feel like there are a lot of typos, especially the part about people's names. It's a sweet pet story, so it's okay to read without being too cruel.

The male protagonist's network is obviously very powerful, and so is the heroine's grandfather. The male protagonist has very good connections in every country, and his grandfather also has many disciples who are respected by the three countries. The result is indeed respect, but it is basically useless. The whole story is too passive and not very logical. At first, I felt that both the male and female protagonists were smart and would think many more steps than others. However, they became weaker as time went on. There was no backup plan for doing things, and they were not rigorous at all when resisting attacks from others. Several people who could have been dealt with long ago kept delaying. The relationship network of the male protagonist was basically useless in the second half. There was actually no description of the original villain. She can do better than the male and female protagonists, but she can live for a long, long time, and it's always the same as the famous time-travel novels. The heroine is liked by all the powerful men... And then she is tied to the palace, and then escapes. The heroine's choice is also very strange. She knows that she is pregnant and has not made all the plans. She said she acted on her own without being told by others? If the male protagonist's subordinates really tell him, he will definitely say it. It is many times better than a pregnant woman acting alone. Besides, the medicine prescribed by the male protagonist is not that urgent at all. It is really because the heroine's aura feels that the child will definitely not be lost. The further things go, the less complete the insurance plan is. And the monk Qingjue... The monk and the monk should see through the world of mortals and then clean up their cultivation. Now this ending is to repay the murder debt of the heroine? ? ? ? ? ? Even if it is written that the heroine has a good ending, I am happy for her, and then I have no distracting thoughts, and then I can continue to be a monk...

There are a lot of typos and wrong names. It looks a bit confusing, especially the second half. I hope you can be more careful.

Opinion: There are too many typos, the language and sentences are not smooth, and the punctuation marks are messed up. Alas, the character names seem to be a headache! Also, the hostess already has a name, "Qing" or "Wan", so why must their mother also have this name? It was a scene of chaos! The plot of the story is good, but it's a pity that the author's writing was so poor that I didn't have the heart to read it. There were too many repetitive sentences and nonsense! What a pity that a good story was ruined by the author!

How should I put it? Firstly, there are too many typos, and secondly, it is too similar to Princess Quan Pampering the World. It's very similar to "The Chouyan Prince I Want". Anyway, I just qidu that book and it's not very creative. It would have been easier if I had read that one first, but I read this one. The third thing is that the plot is a bit strange. I won't say why it is strange. But seeing as the author worked so hard to write so many thousand words, I still had the strength to finish reading it.

It's Monday today, so I'll give you a perfect score for the novel ٩( 'ω' )و get! I have a lot of reading skills, but it's a pity that I don't have any words to praise you.

This book is very good at training readers' reading comprehension skills.

The book is a good book, very interesting, but sometimes the character of the heroine is not very likable. Her sentence "I trust you, but you keep squandering my trust" makes me feel bad for the hero.