Cataclysm

I won't talk about the minor flaws. Every novel has some. The overall plot is quite good. I really want to continue reading. I have been enduring it since the appearance of Guan. I endured it until chapter 426. I finally couldn't bear it anymore. There was no such person from the beginning, but suddenly he became the lover of the past life, and then he had to be her. Did the author just arrange a woman when he suddenly got interested? Moreover, the character of this person is really annoying. He cries to attract monsters, kills others, and has no sense of guilt. He does this twice and three times. He is usually venomous and petty, but the protagonist is completely devoted to him. If you have to write it like this, at least give more foreshadowing in the early stage to show that the male protagonist has a woman who he loves deeply. No, just mention it in one sentence and then it must be her. I'm going to abandon the article! ! !

Thanks to all the book friends who let me say goodbye to being poisoned by junk books, and saved me a lot of traffic and time to read junk books. Book friends who have good books, please recommend good books.

This book is poorly written from beginning to end. It feels like no matter how strong the enemy is, it can be killed in seconds, and the killing is a bit too harsh. Isn't the life of others life? The protagonist's parents don't have a dog yet? Just kill hundreds of people almost to death. Author, you are great!

I have never seen such a stupid Madonna novel. I can only use two words to describe it as "dregs"

The man on fire on the cover is a fierce thief, with a double mask and an ice stick hat, he is invincible in Asia, and a big bullet bounces away the crow's feet.

The plot is pretty good, but it feels a bit too complicated. But I have been a book friend for many years. I think it's okay. In fact, I think the ending could have included a few more chapters about the battle, but it ends well like this.

The plot is too unreasonable. The protagonist has only reached level 3 after being reborn. A random passerby is level 4. Is this setting a joke?

Take it off the shelf, take it back, read it and think about it again, write it again in a few years, spend ten years building a classic

Some sentences can obviously be finished in one sentence, but why do we need to add so many commas?

Lots of typos