Excellent Young Man

Xiao Yao's daughter is fine and can leave the fairy world. Since the fairy world is not willing to fight the demons, can't Xiao Yao just take his daughter and his friends to leave the fairy world and return to the earth. Now it seems that Xiao Yao insists on fighting? He just wants to live a simple life with his family and friends, but reality always makes him deviate from what he said! I hope Xiao Yao realizes her wish as soon as possible.

Following the author to experience Xiao Yao's life, I couldn't help but want to share the passionate feeling after reading it! It's like returning to my youth! The heroines Xia Yixing, Pink Butterfly, and Li Xiaoxiao are all very charming and unique. The author has rich experience, unique writing style, and a clear mind to write such a good article!

Really pretending, although YY novels will be fun to read, but if it is too exaggerated, it will be too boring. How old is the protagonist? He has been living with three grandfathers since he was a child. He immediately became so arrogant in the city. When I saw the eighth chapter, the miracle doctor was licking him here, but he didn't give him any face. Putting aside his medical skills, he was an elder after all. He also said: I've never seen him before, I was shocked. You must know that you are begging others, asking for other people's silver needles, asking for other people's ginseng, asking others to help you, asking others to help you find medicine, but you really don't like them. They just ask questions and you can pretend to be there. If anyone sees this comment, they will definitely say, no one forces you to read it. Okay, I won't watch it

I only read a few dozen chapters before I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist is too arrogant. He is just a bodyguard, but he easily breaks people's bones in other companies. The heroine is also too brainless. Can she fire the key personnel of the company with just one sentence? There is also that person named Song Yilin. I have never seen such a brainless person. He almost died for an unrelated person. What did this person think?

Author, why did Xia Yixing and Qin Rou not react at all when Xiao Yao suddenly called her mom in Chapter 464? It stands to reason that they paid back Xiao Yao but they didn't know that Qin Rou was his mother. The writing here is too abrupt. I hope the author will change it!

Just reading the introduction makes me think that the protagonist is awesome, and I don't want to read it anymore. Just think about it: One grandfather is a miracle doctor, another grandfather is a master of ancient martial arts, and one grandfather is the king of killers. Doesn't the protagonist also have a father who is a military boss, a father who is the richest man in the business world, a father who is the godfather of the underworld, the grandfather is the leader of the world of cultivation, the grandmother is the leader of the outside world, and the protagonist's mother is the fairy king of the fairy world! Only in this way can he be worthy of the protagonist's medical skills! If it is an urban novel, then it should be based on the city, not three-in-one, it would be too disturbing! Also, the protagonist's family is so awesome, why didn't the grandparents kill all the little Japs? I just want to read an urban novel! Why don't you make it so exaggerated?

There are a lot of typos, and character names are often written incorrectly and confusingly. I don't know if it's the author's problem or the website's problem.

Chapter 1789, Xu Kuangge looked at Xu Kuangge with something strange in his eyes. Are you looking in the mirror? First of all, the book written by the author is very interesting, but can the name not be so confusing?

It's too tedious. You have to write three or four chapters just for a fight. It takes a long time to talk about a fight. It's too difficult to make up the word count.

I have heard that so many books have one thing in common, that is, all kinds of monsters and monsters can cause trouble for pigs' feet, whether they have the ability or not, they will get in trouble 😂