Mu Chengjiao

The writing is quite good, but I feel that the male and female protagonists have never considered it from Ah Qin's point of view. They just gave Ah Qin what they thought was best for Ah Qin, but they never thought about whether these are what Ah Qin wants most. This young couple has been torn apart by you. If I were Ah Qin, the one I care about most is Lei Yun, not my brother and sister-in-law whom I recognized halfway. It was Lei Yun who saved her from the sea of misery. Where was my brother at that time? The only thing Ah Qin did wrong was that he almost killed his sister-in-law, but it was excusable, and he wouldn't be disliked by the male and female protagonists like that, feeling cold and dismissive. I felt aggrieved for Ah Qin.

Well, this is a book, tsk. The male protagonist and the female protagonist met so late, and I skipped reading after reading more than thirty chapters. And the male protagonist is too weak, right? The secret guard? There are only a few dozen left out of more than a hundred, and they can't even fight against their own aunt. They can't fight this one, and they can't win that one. Even if they want to save the heroine, they still have to consider this and that. Oh, forget it, I can't stand it anymore. [Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it! ]

I want to say that this book is really illogical. This is the first book that made me think that there is no male protagonist. It took about 100 chapters for the male protagonist to appear and talk to the heroine. You know, there are only 400 chapters in total. Let's talk about other things. First of all, there are quite a lot of typos. , Fortunately, some of them are homophones and I can understand it, but I can't understand it when you mix up the characters, especially in one chapter where the third prince is defeated by the third prince. The most important thing is that you can't connect the context and who is defeated by who. Please, don't you check it before publishing? Secondly, the characters' endings can be changed if they want. Take Cuiping, for example, it was said that Miss Chen Er, the Crown Princess, was sold to a brothel, and then she returned to Lin Lian. Are you kidding me? And the eldest lady, she was written as cold and indifferent in the beginning, and she didn't care about her own affairs, but later she became a warm-hearted person, and she stood up for Lin Lian, a concubine? The most important thing is, doesn't the male protagonist have a bad reputation? There is no explanation why. Is it because he is dormant, or is it framed by his aunt? His reputation is so bad, why does the emperor reuse him to that extent? The same goes for the heroine. One moment she has a bad reputation, and the next she is praised by everyone. It feels completely illogical. This is a costume drama, with a strict system and clear hierarchy. Finally, the author spent so much time writing about Lin Hui and her cousin, and also added a sister of the male protagonist, and also involved a deputy general's son, but did not arrange an ending for them. I can figure it out even if you write the ending at the wedding of Lin Hui and her cousin. Also spending a lot of space on the Lu family's ancestors and Xiao Zhang's mother and son, but there is no ending in the end. I don't know why Xiao Zhang can do whatever he wants, and the ancestor doesn't know that Xiao Zhang's mother and son want to kill him. In other words, the Duke's palace must still be handed over to the male protagonist's second brother, which is very confusing. Some people may question me why I haven't finished reading it since there are so many opinions. I can only say that at the beginning, I thought it was okay, the writing was not bad, and the characters were okay. But as I went on, it became more perfunctory, and the more I watched, the worse I felt. I had to endure it to see how bad it could get, but the result was really no bottom line.

I suspect that my ancestor was in poor health because he carried the string of Buddhist beads given by Brother Ming, which is why Lu Jingran later killed his mother and brother.

This book is well written and worth reading.

Rebirth, so stupid

At first I thought it was quite interesting, but later on the heroine betted her mother's life and her own safety on her grandmother, and I thought she was so stupid. I'm timid in doing things, dragging my feet, and don't like it. Pretend to be smart when you are not smart. Dislike. The heroine is so stupid

I don't understand. What's the point of being reborn...?

I've read Chapter 120 and I still haven't seen where the male protagonist is, and the female protagonist is really weak and feels that there is no need to be reborn...

How did this book reach 9.1? There are many typos and the names of characters are confused several times. Character backgrounds/arrangements that don't match up before and after There are too many characters and it always feels messy...