The Ultimate Live-In Son-in-Law

This book is a good book, updated every day with two to three sections. If you really don't have the intention, why can't you finish the book?!!! You don't care what my opinion is, it's all from my heart.

The plot is procrastinating, the main line is sluggish, there is too much nonsense, the routines are repetitive, there is a lack of novelty, updates are too slow, and it treats the symptoms rather than the root cause.

It's so difficult to update. It disappears every time at the critical moment. Hey, I have to wait another day after reading it. Can I update more in one day?

Let me guess the plot of the next few chapters: This Chen Meisi probably hooked up with some unlucky guy who was going to attend the banquet. Then she got into an arrogant conversation with Qin Hao. Qin Hao scolded him. The unlucky guy asked the bodyguards to deal with Qin Hao. Qin Hao slapped them all down and then The unlucky guy came to find his dad. When his dad came, there were two possibilities: 1. I didn't know it was Qin Hao who was beaten again before he could fix it, 2. He recognized it was Qin Hao or heard his unlucky son said his name was Qin Hao, and immediately knelt down to beg for mercy. Then Sister Rou's classmate was shocked, that's about it. This plot 😂

The plot of the story was originally good, but the author wrote too much nonsense about other people's inner thoughts, which took up a lot of space. What the readers see is the development of the story, not what other people are thinking in their minds. ? Sometimes, for Qin Hao's words, the author writes two or three pages of what others are thinking. Is it useful??

Too ink! A little idea, written over and over again endlessly. It seems that those who are dissatisfied with the protagonist are all short-sighted people.

I hope it will be faster. I really want to know Tianjun's true identity. I am pregnant with him. He is a top mercenary, and there is Wei Shufeng. He once leaked the location of Qin Hao's mission to Tianjun. This is a big deal. She knows how to play mahjong all day long.

There are too many repetitive words to describe one thing. Too inky.

This book is actually okay, but I want to ask the author. The current plot is probably only one-sixth. This is only one province. There are five provinces and other provinces in the country that have not been written. You also have to write about treating the heroine, the protagonist looking for his mother, the threats of various sects, the Tianjun's Tianfu, foreign mercenary groups, and several other mentions. There are also the mysterious old ways of the protagonist and the curses mentioned, etc. It is estimated that if it is written like this, it will need to be written about 5,000 chapters. According to updating 2-3 chapters every day, it will take at least four and a half years, and many plots are reused, which will slow down the development of the story, which will affect the evaluation of this book. Is this really good?

It's all about psychological description. Basically, there are very few battle scenes. A single martial arts skill can make the onlookers psychologically describe for a long time. It's too tedious. But any junior high school level writing is better than this. I suggest you learn more from other novels. Moreover, the plot routine is too repetitive: it's all about going to one place, and a arrogant daughter looking for trouble. , Was scolded by Qin Hao, but there would be a kind-hearted daughter's friend to speak for Qin Hao; he was provoked by a person with a low status, and then aroused the anger of a big shot, and went to the big shot's house to fight him, and then a bunch of psychological descriptions were given to the crowd. After the defeat, the daughter regretted it, but Qin Hao didn't want to see him... The same thing! The plot seems to be in a loop without any new development. I recommend watching "Three Realms Taobao Store". The plot is circuitous and uses some ancient words in every sentence, such as "nod". The plot is constantly developing (although the best son-in-law is also "developing", the plot is all repetitive). The plot of each journey is very novel, and many poems are quoted from Journey to the West, such as "Like a person:... (Describing the environment)" "In a flash: (battle scene)", etc.; The writing is very exciting. In comparison, this door-to-door son-in-law is so nutritious! Do we want to see those Qin Haodu gods still bullying mortals?