The Backrest System of Time Travel Makes It Easy to Enjoy the Cool Weather

He was forced to write this prodigal son who was beaten until he was pissed off in the past into a very powerful and powerful man. The change was too sudden and the plot in the middle was too bloody. The plot of a time-traveling female virgin was too serious. I wanted to save it and save it. Also, the emotional line was too delayed. But the writing was really good in the beginning. I was waiting for the update every day. I hope the author can take a look at the overall idea and not flip it too much.

No wonder the rating is not high. I felt pretty good when I first read the first few chapters, but after reading about fifty chapters, I was already speechless! A man with a soul in his twenties, for no reason or reason, would force something from the hands of a teenage girl! Although the boss said it once, you didn't explicitly say you wanted it. You just said that what others are holding is yours, miss? Not a single polite word, so hey! The whole scene is a close-up scene of two brainless women, and her mother is having sex! Hey! Nothing like what a heroine should look like! Totally child's play house! It's useless to have any business acumen. If you don't understand and use this system to play its role better, it feels like writing without any brain!

I feel like the writing was pretty good in the early stages, but then it got weird. Jinling felt very good in the early stage, but then it stopped performing. Jin Lingping's revenge, Zhang De suffered miserably in the early stage, but he became a big boss in the later stage. Jin Lingping's backstage was so big, his revenge was not avenged, and no one related to Jinling appeared later. The heroine was a saint, and she never returned. Beishuo was so powerful, and she didn't write about it later. Emmmmm, it feels like the two parts were not written by the same person, or maybe the author forgot the previous ones later? The same goes for the system. It worked in the early stage, but then basically disappeared. . . . . . It's hard to make up my mind. I feel like the author should sort it out and see which line is the key point. In the later period, things were too messy and complicated, and I couldn't find the key points. The female protagonist and the male protagonist were basically useless. Hey, it's hard to calm down.

The heroine is really capable but has no overall perspective. The better she treats her, the more ignorant she becomes. It's a miracle that a typical doting and coquettish person can survive. It's really annoying.

The heroine is simply a white lotus green tea bitch. If it weren't for the halo of the heroine, she would have died long ago. She is rubbish.

It's pretty good. Some people have different opinions, so you have to watch it yourself to know whether it's good or not.

I feel like the money is so good that I have no interest in reading anymore.

Such a good system has the wrong owner

I feel like the article was not written by one person at all. There are even a bunch of typos in the second half, so I decided to abandon the article!

After seeing Chapter 200, I didn't want to read it anymore. I felt that the system I had brought with me was not questioned in ancient times. Before I became stronger, water, lotion, and facial masks were all taken out of the system and no one questioned it. It felt a bit messy and exaggerated. I no longer have the interest to read anymore, so the author should keep up the good work!