Quickly Wear: Go on a Rampage, Heroine!

Emmmm~ It's just so so, at least it's not comparable to the fast-traveling stories I've read. It's not recommended for those with "heart disease", otherwise it will piss you off. The ending of each world is too hasty. When the first world ended, I thought I had read it wrong, but... I was right. It was too hasty. Sometimes I read the wrong way. Anyway, that's how I feel, don't criticize~

The content is very interesting, but it is too short, and the details are not explained clearly, leaving a lot of things for people to imagine. In fact, the author can also dig a hole, such as who is the boss mentioned by the system? Also, Leng Feng has no father or mother, so why can't he be the system boss? It's her father or mother. This also explains the fact that this boss protects Leng Feng in the book and allows him to go back anytime and anywhere. I think it will be more interesting. (Personal suggestion, for reference only) Is the author interested in publishing a series? ( ' - ' * )

To be honest, I skipped reading this book. I only read the first story and the ending. I didn't read the others, so I will only comment on the first story because I didn't particularly understand the ending. In the first story, the plot and plot are actually okay, especially the first few chapters, which are quite interesting. The middle and the end are a bit sad. The female protagonist died for the male protagonist, and her memory was wiped by the system when she entered the second world. When I saw this, I couldn't help but cry TTTT. It's a pity that I didn't read the extras. I don't know what will happen to the male protagonist after the female protagonist leaves. But overall, except for the length and the ending, which is a little sad, this novel is actually pretty good.

I've read a lot of fast-traveling articles, and I really can't stand this one. I'll list some of my faults. 1. Background The heroine wears a sadistic story because she dislikes it? ? ? Immortal operation, forgive me for not understanding it 2. Heroine The female protagonist said that she doesn't like abuse stories, so how can she not be abused by the male protagonist a thousand times? I regard the male protagonist as my first love. The male protagonist abuses her in various ways, and then sticks to her when she is nicer. Is she being abused? Moreover, the heroine's various actions are a bit unbearable. 3. Male protagonist The male lead is a real scumbag. He seems to like the female lead very much. He has no connection with the second and third girls. His attitude towards the female lead is also incomprehensible. Sometimes he slaps her, rapes her, and abuses her like crazy. At the next time, he is being courted by all kinds of snail girls. The female lead sues for being raped by her. As a result, the male lead is a crazy fan and throws cabbage away. The male lead says I don't know and it's over? Why doesn't the heroine do anything now? There is also the fact that the male protagonist's favorability level rises and falls inexplicably. I can't understand what makes him excited, so he is very confused. Later, because the female protagonist burned the house, the male protagonist's favorability level dropped by 6000 and became a negative number. In the end, he still stayed up to take care of the female protagonist. Is it okay to forcefully clean up? 4. System The system is standard for fast travel. The cute system can really bring a lot of joy. But I don't understand the principle of the system in this article. It's not that sometimes the temper tantrums don't show up, but basically the heroine is not there when she needs it. There are very few appearances. And as soon as she appears, the heroine suffers. The sequelae are headaches, and only the male protagonist can cure it? What kind of instrument is the male protagonist and how awesome is he? There is still 10,000 favorability points. How can I get this? I'm afraid it will be difficult for the heroine to keep it for her whole life. 5. Plot language At first, the heroine suddenly commits suicide and kills the hero, and then does it all over again. It feels very complicated. I really didn't understand it at first. It's very confusing. I don't know if the author is trying to satirize those outrageous sadistic stories. But emm, I seem to have written a lot of sadistic stories. The heroine's words are full of swear words. Although everyone will say it now, she is the heroine of a novel after all, so it's better to use less. In short, if you want to read the quick time travel story, I suggest you stop reading it. I read a few chapters and really couldn't stand it. Those who want to read sadistic stories can read it. But everyone has their own vision and style. I can't deny the author's great writing. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The heroine makes my scalp numb

I don't like torturing the heroine, I don't like having to torture the heroine in order to get the male and female protagonists to be together, the force is not sweet.

This plot is absolutely amazing, I was dazzled by it. I can't even see it! ! ! The introduction of the book is very good, but the text is like, what is this?

I really don't understand why the female protagonist was raped by the male protagonist, but she doesn't care just because the male protagonist became a snail girl? Do you like the male protagonist just because he is obedient? I don't understand. According to his character, Ye Qiubai was lonely and didn't have a precocious temperament. Isn't it normal for him to cry because his mother died? Why did he feel distressed when the male protagonist stopped responding? I'm really speechless. I promised that the heroine doesn't like abuse stories, but this plot is clearly about the male protagonist abusing the female protagonist thousands of times, but the female protagonist still treats him as if she was in love with him for the first time! Speechless

I'm also a sucker for writing about abuse. I was so angry even after watching the first scene. The heroine was too arrogant, and she was raped by the male protagonist in a carriage. I was so angry.

I just finished watching the first world, emmm, there are so many pitfalls, who is Bai Yang, who is the heroine of Xian Wang, and what is the ending of Baili Fa? What's the ending of Yue Liuli? I ignored them all... It makes me feel very sad.