Pursuer

I really think it looks good. That is to say, the last one, the one where the whole family died, is not very good-looking and not interesting. I can't even remember whose name it was. It would be nice if there could be another finale that would be more complete.

Everyone's image is written very charmingly, and the content is also very exciting, which suits my taste.

No one thinks the staffing looks like Dark One, Death Notice

The plot is exciting, but there are too many typos and it's a bit verbose.

Very good

Typos are also invincible!

The writing process is good, the characters are vivid and active, and it is easy to attract book readers.

This is not a suspense mystery novel. The author should write a romance novel. Two-thirds of the whole article is nonsense.

There are a lot of holes left unfilled

It looks good, but there are too many typos and the names are a bit confusing.