Cultivation on Earth

It didn't work from the beginning. The author always felt that his relatives and friends were as powerful as him. He was often the one who caused troubles and suffered disasters for his relatives and friends. He could have easily solved the problem and left a tail for them to abuse his relatives and friends. He was really perverted! Others drugged his wife, and he drove them away without letting others know how powerful he was. Then he came back to help his wife. Why don't you abuse your wife yourself? You have to go through other people's hands. You are so perverted.

The first half of this book feels good, and the plot in the middle is also very strong. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the front, but in the second half, especially the ending, the plot develops too fast and suddenly, and many questionable plots are not explained clearly (such as what the sky is, the previous supremes are not dead, but after the supremes are alive, there are almost no What an outstanding performance, and before the Supreme gave people a strong and invincible tall image) A lot of foreshadowing was either hastily taken back or forgotten, giving people the impression that it was very rushed. The female protagonist rarely appeared after the male protagonist left the earth, almost becoming a passerby. In the end, the male protagonist suddenly had a son, which was not expected at 8 o'clock.

Haha, writing about cultivating immortals at this level is really unbearable. There is no logic at all.

Okay, okay, I feel like there is a follow-up, I want to follow-up, follow-up, follow-up, quickly, quickly, quickly Quick, quick, follow up

That's it, gone?

Not bad, I like it very much

There is no clue at all, it is crudely crafted, a cultivator is grinding and timid, and has no bastard spirit at all. How could he write it?

It's generally not good, it's just a cool and mindless kind of writing, with a lot of inexplicable things in the structure of the writing.

Make it up

I gave up decisively before finishing the first chapter.