Return to the World of Cultivation

After reading Chapter 23, I feel that it's not bad. But personally I think the progress can be faster. However... We are all writers who understand, but this kind of online writing is better to be a little more watery... Oh, by the way. Regarding content settings, don't write things in the real world that are too low-level. If it is to highlight the advanced nature of the world of cultivation, believe me, you are capable of expressing it better. (A simple book review, full of nonsense. If there is any offense, I hope that the author brothers and all readers will forgive me.)

Speaking personally, this book is very well written! However, to cultivate immortality is to fight against others, heaven and oneself. When I saw that Suhang was afraid of God's will, I was very excited! Also, the ending is a bit messy, and it does not indicate where Su Hang went in the past, where his personal emotions belong, and the relationship with Chu Yu is not well written. But I am not criticizing you. Everyone has their own ideas. Writing is not only about making money, but also bringing yourself into it, and you will always have your own shadow. I think you wrote it very well, come on!

A word of advice to you: Just read the book, don't read the comments. If you have some understanding, it is a good book.

It's just rubbish. It doesn't have the ruthlessness of the so-called cultivators, and it doesn't have a smart enough mind. The character is too cowardly. Or is it the author himself? A cultivator must retaliate. This is the character that still exists. He should be killed. There are very few clips of cultivators. People in the world of cultivators are such rubbish. They only talk nonsense and talk nonsense without any use. They have no strength or ability at all. Are you sure you are writing a character who has returned from the world of cultivation?

The more you write, the more rubbish you write, and the more you write, the more cowardly you become.

It's not that good. These women have written too many articles. They lack the passion for reading and the protagonist's passion for upgrading and fighting monsters.

I watched Chapter 60 and couldn't stand it anymore. A college student fell in love and gave birth to a 5.6-Year-old child. Besides, what does Yan Xue and his husband have to do with you?

It's very interesting and consistent. It's not like other cultivation novels where the protagonist is rubbish but can offend any big force. If I just send experts to crush the protagonist to death, however, how many of them are written, they keep sending rubbish to find trouble for the protagonist and then help the protagonist grow up and finally get destroyed. Also, they force the protagonist to show off, whether it's necessary or not. The protagonist has to forcefully pretend to be cool. I want to say that this kind of novel is really rubbish. It's disgusting to watch. It's obviously unscientific and yet the protagonist is allowed to win. It makes me want to vomit. This book is the only cultivation novel I've read in the past few years. It's very good. Although the end of the book is a bit rushed with the method of cultivation.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing 302. I really don't understand why we have to help the Su family in Beijing? No one in my family thinks highly of him, including his grandfather, and there is no family affection at all! If he wants to help, does it lack the family affection, longing and reluctance of his grandfather's generation? Not at all, the whole hot face is against the cold butt When the protagonist has just entered the capital, he has never met those people and has no family ties to speak of. When faced with the Su family in the capital, from old to young, the sarcasm and disapproval of his lineage are not bloody at all. These sarcasms are not just you, but also your grandparents, parents, shouldn't they be bloody at this time? Don't tell me that the protagonist's experience is too great to look down on the ordinary world. This is completely nonsense. Even if you have no blood, don't you have no filial piety? From this review, spicy chicken, farewell

Trash, I can't even read a hundred chapters.