Dragon King Hall

The final ending is a bit rushed. Donghua Immortal could not have calculated this step without calculating that Chen Fan was controlled by Chen Mo. Also, the junior sister did not appear in the end. The original intention of Chen Mo's rebirth was to return to the days when he lived with his junior sister. I don't know if the author forgot. Anyway, I can only give this novel 7 points out of 10. After all, many things in it do not make sense. I hope the author will work hard. I look forward to the next work! ! !

The style of this book, which has more than 800 chapters, is completely different from the previous ones. After checking, it turns out that the author has changed. It feels like I am reading two books. The foreshadowing laid in the previous books has been discarded. There is no foreshadowing for the male protagonist and Yan Qingcheng to be together. The male protagonist in the previous book has no interest in Yan Qingcheng at all. No, Yan Qingcheng did not appear as many times as Murong Yaner. Moreover, the male protagonist had always been thinking about his junior sister before. It was too sudden to suddenly fall in love with Yan Qingcheng. I heard that the male protagonist was ntr later and did not dare to continue watching. It was so cool that the male protagonist suffered such treatment. . .

The spicy chicken author is really good. The more I read in the later period, the more angry I became. The foreshadowing in the previous part was all gone. The feeling was really different. There was no foreshadowing at all, and it directly changed another plot. I didn't write about the little junior sister and what happened after the encounter. The junior sister became a passerby in the later period. I really don't know if the author didn't read the previous plot?

To be honest, I have read 590 chapters of this book, but I feel like I am no different from two or three chapters. It's a cool article, and it's the same cool article. You can avoid a lot of unnecessary trouble by clearly showing your identity. But you want to say that you are too lazy to pay attention to others, and then kill others after they are exploded by your words and ridicule. Isn't it tiring? Isn't it strange? Also, every time on any occasion, 99.99% Of people laugh at the protagonist, and the psychological journeys of various supporting characters have to be written in order to make up the word count? Again, the various prefaces do not match the afterwords, and a persona is clearly established, but it is not long before he overturns it, or it is a character, situation, and mentality before, and then he forcibly establishes a persona and overturns what he said. For example, the father of the protagonist attended a county party and received gifts from a group of "big guys" , including various brand-name valuables. When they arrived at their own home, the same people gave gifts but refused to accept them; another example is that the protagonist's roommate named Pang Du has clearly set up a persona of being devoted to his childhood sweetheart, but he still wants to play all kinds of tricks on other girls; wait, wait, isn't it split? Then, every time after the protagonist has been ridiculed for a period of time, a big shot, A, B, and C, comes out and nods and bows to the protagonist. As a result, when our protagonist is forced to show off, everyone around him must have a negative intelligence, ignore the actions of A, B, and C, and forcefully question the protagonist's various cheating, deception, and bluffing. Have they grown up? Finally, the martial arts level that I set has to come up with several sets of judging modes. Warriors, magicians, cultivators... It is clearly said that the seventh level of Qi Condensation can kill the divine realm in an instant. When grabbing that nine-leaf or flower, I can't even beat a body-protecting realm master to death with one full-strength martial arts punch. Are you tired? I really suggest that when writing a book in the future, the author must read it together with the previous ones after writing it, or create a database by himself and design each character carefully. Don't make up and write something that is so wrong that you can't even understand it. Of course, this is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it!

Junk books. The heroine was even kissed by a passerby.

Chen Mo is a clown who only has theoretical strength but no actual strength but pretends to be sexy and makes enemies for the sake of so-called face. He bullies his relatives and greets outsiders. He eats from the bowl and looks at the food in the pot but refuses to admit it. I was puzzled. It's not bad for you to be slapped in the face, but if you slap a group of fools in the face every day, it's as if you are very powerful. Are those big guys who have climbed to that position a brainless person? All of them are like human beings. Real bosses will rationally observe your every word, behavior, character, temperament, etc. It's not just mindless ridicule. Slapping someone in the face is fun, but slapping a fool and a smart person in the face gives people a completely different feeling. Besides, the male protagonist has a cold and indifferent face after his soul age is so many years (someone owes you money?). In reality, this kind of person is actually the most disgusting person. Only by being sensible and laughing when it's time to be angry can we make the best use of the resources at hand to do things, rather than putting on an expression of "no one cares about me" and being the most awesome person to attract people's disgust. Breaking people's legs and killing people at every turn is so bad Chapter 1741 Chen Mo's fiancée Yan Qingcheng was cheated on. She felt that this Chen Mo was an eunuch, arrogant and thought he was invincible. He acts like he is a great person by cultivating immortality. He looks down on anyone who says he is low-key. He is so crazy. I advise everyone to look at it carefully, it is really unbearable to look at it.

Laowang Palace

Good guy, there are so many bad reviews, count me among them.

Chen Mo was like an idiot to Fuxi. They all knew that the Emperor's Star would be destroyed if the dragon veins were not subdued, but there was still a glimmer of hope in the subduing. In the end, he scolded Fuxi mercilessly, saying that Fuxi would kill many people. I just said before that which one is more important is the people who died in the uniform or the entire Emperor Constellation. Between the two decisions of whether to only die in part or destroy the entire planet and galaxy, I obviously chose the former but I am asking why? I was really convinced. The previous preparations made by changing the author were all in vain. The whole character of the protagonist also changed and became more and more chaotic.

Well enough