Excellent Perspective

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It's all a routine: Die ① jade pendant, Die ② broken family and poverty, Die ③ rich second generation, second generation official, underworld, big family. Mold④The evil forces are everywhere.

After seeing 149 chapters, 29% gave up, and the overall score was 6, a negative review. Time is confusing. It feels like it happened the next day, but what I wrote in a week turns out to be the same thing in a month. (Chapter 58 talks about being caught in the casino, Chapter 67 stays on the first floor for a week, but the Saturday banquet has not yet arrived, Chapter 74 is written a month later, all reflecting the confusion of time) The second point is the confusion of character creation, (Chapter 43, the lines of the bald gangster, are those spoken by decent supporting characters, right? In Chapter 50, a powerful and coaxing rich second generation with a brand around his neck only costs 50,000? Isn't a million worthy of the setting of a rich second generation? 117 When it comes to the meeting of the male and female protagonists in Chapter 119, the male and female protagonists are like good men who keep themselves as good as jade, but the male and female protagonists have a one-night stand? The lines are also like the lines of a scumbag man and a scumbag woman.) The third point is that the villain is created in a mess, with a few brainless second-generation characters like clowns. It was originally a normal plot where the protagonist slaps the face, but after the second meeting, the second-generation guy who was slapped in the face admires the protagonist and licks the protagonist? Saw at least 3 of these second generation ones. Fourth, in the early stage, I always emphasized making money to take my sister abroad for treatment. But after receiving millions every time, I still have to make money before going for treatment? Do you need one small goal at a time for overseas treatment? I didn't read it later, so I guess I arranged for the protagonist to cure his sister. Why not just set it up in the previous article and say that if the current medical treatment cannot cure my sister, she will end up getting married. The fifth plot setting is also unreasonable. Don't want to comment anymore

The author writes in a mess, with everything going on, without a theme and purpose. The main character is too 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻

Very nice

After reading this book, I actually doubted my IQ.

The author writes the characters to be selfish and extreme, and writes the selfishness in a glossy manner, which shows what kind of person the author is. The book has no central idea. Five stars. I have never seen a book like this in several years of reading!