I Joined the Admin Group: Stockpiling Ten Million Supplies to Survive at Sea

There are a lot of typos and there are many bugs in the plot logic. What does it mean to write so many brainless female supporting characters?

It's good to read. I've never read this kind of book before. It's the first one I've read with this kind of theme. It's very interesting. If you want to read it, you can get into it.

To be honest, I am impressed by the author's ideas. The entry point of joining the game management group, the multi-layered nesting of sea survival + construction + mechas, and even the outrageously bold setting of "CP is a fish" - if you look at it individually, every idea has its shining points. You can feel that she has really built a big world in her mind, not copying a template or assembly line production. Many writers really don't have this ability to "dare to think". But the problem is - when the idea was implemented, it was completely shattered. Good ideas require good craftsmanship. He happens to be a "write whatever comes to mind" type of contestant: an idea pops up, and without waiting for it to mature, he inserts it directly into the text. The result is - 1. The "underworld humor" of the management group wants to create contrast, but the lines are like signatures 2. The heroine's title, drawings, and materials are dumped all at once, and it reads like going through a warehouse list 3. The setting of the black shark doll could have been very charming (mystery + contrast + tension), but the execution is like "Boss Doll Bidong Literature" 4. The values ​​are even more arbitrary, a three-meter-long and 20-ton fish, the heroine uses a kitchen knife to chop the fish's brains - the picture is there, and the rationality takes off directly Creativity is a gem, polish is... Well, construction site level. The pacing is controlled, the lines are polished, and the setting is consistent - what a great book it would be. Ideas deserve applause, execution deserves... Suggestions for improvement. Suitable for "scan reading" - skip the list and embarrassing lines, and go straight to the big frame and cool points. Don't chew too much, as it will scratch your teeth.