The Concubine's Guide: Demon King, Please Enter Your Account

You can't be immature any more! ! !

Not a good ending! A bit unfinished

It's a bit nonsense. This is gone. It's too hasty. The writing is okay, but the ending is perfunctory. Since I want to write a book, I think the minimum attitude must be

The whole logic is confusing! It starts at the beginning but ends at the end, just make up the word count!

This ending caught me off guard.

I don't know what you want to express, the author. The thinking mode is really too confusing. The content is boring and boring. There are many typos. The important parts of describing one thing are not clearly written, and the unimportant parts are long-winded. I really don't know that this kind of book will be published. Hurry up and see what other people have written before publishing it!

I think the ending is pretty good, but the part where the prince is chasing him is too bland.

What the hell are you writing? The plot is messy, the logic is illogical, the writing is flat and straightforward, and there is no literary talent at all.

It's very unrealistic, like a joke

Is this the end?