Treasure-Gathering Immortal Furnace

Not bad, pretty good, but Yan Ruyu was a bit annoying at the beginning. Others were okay.

Very well written, please update it soon

The plot is rigorous

Overall, it's pretty good. Disadvantages: a lot of nonsense, and the enemy can't be killed, leaving hidden dangers.

The logic is okay, the plot is good, and there are no poisonous points for the time being.

The heroine is obviously Wang Zhuqing. I really don't know what the author is writing. If you don't know how to write, don't write.

It looks good, and the content I wrote feels more reasonable, which shows that the author has a relatively high level.

More saliva than tea

In fact, this is my second creation of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, and I have my own understanding in it. I think as a reader, you shouldn't comment too much and ask others for anything. If you think it's good, you won't read it if it doesn't. It's very simple. The requirements are so high. Why don't you write a book yourself?

Bad book