Cute Baby from Heaven: Kiss, Mr. Li

I have been following this novel since I was in the house. Although I haven't finished it yet, I can't help but want to share my current opinions: 1. The early stage of this story is okay, but from the middle stage, the plot is very, very draggy. Maybe the plot of the novel is to be tortured, but there is no need to be so pretentious. The mission that can be ended is still released after N chapters, which is very annoying. I skipped chapters after that. It may be that the author charges per word, but this pace is more likely to make readers abandon the book. 2. The relationship between the characters in the book is actually not complicated. Just these few people appear over and over again, which is actually unnecessary. It would be boring to watch. 3. The emotional clues are very clear. The ups and downs are not the emotions of the protagonist, but the three elders next to him who are causing trouble. It is unnecessary. If the first third is a neutral rating, the second half will be a negative rating.

These two weeks feel like two months. The plot of the story is a bit baffling. The male protagonist likes the female protagonist so much that he doesn't even call her. The writing is a bit outrageous. If this continues, I won't read it.

Updates are too slow and it's hard to catch up.

In the name of love, Ji Liangchen concealed the fact that Yan Xiaye's son was Xiao Yunduo, and the fact that Yi Ren's video was pornographic. As a close friend of Li Yuntang, he really managed to stab his friend. This book is getting more and more boring. The author Jiang Langcai has written it all, and it ends with an anticlimax. It's such a shame that such a good book is so sad.

Doesn't this author read comments? I discovered one thing. Every time the author writes a story, if something happens, he doesn't write the outcome and keeps procrastinating. Until now, Yun Duo's life experience, Qin Yiren's amnesia, whose child is pregnant, Yan Shuirou's identity, Yan Xiaye's pregnancy, the unlocking of the phone... There are so many things. The author writes without beginning or end, always writes useless plots, and never gets to the theme. I think the author is also a procrastinator in life. Also, there are too many plots about Qin Yiren. There are two chapters in one day. It would take several days to write about her. Please write more about the protagonist. Your articles are all bad.

Finally, when Li Yuntang appeared, Xiao Yunduo also knew what he really wanted. It was great. I look forward to the follow-up. I hope the author can update more every time...

I hope the author can work hard and remember to take a lot of rest.

I like the heroine's character and the male protagonist is super flirty. Please keep updating the author.

Finally, a man who looks pretty good at the moment appears next to Qin Yiren. Although everything Chu Xinnian did was for Yiren, I feel that this kind of protection and love is a kind of hurt, which is unclear. I think Chu Xinnian should tell Yiren from the beginning, and the two of them face it together. Looking forward to the update, looking forward to Xia Ye and Yun Duo getting to know each other~

I'm convinced, can you finish the story of the male and female protagonists (other people's stories are separate in this extra chapter). Why is the story of the male and female protagonists procrastinating, and then writing about the people around me takes up so many articles.