The Original Girl Dated Three Guys Online, and Now She's Their Beloved

The characters in the article have distinct personalities and the plot is exciting and rich.

There are too many inconsistencies. In fact, the setting of the heroine and the friendship description of the original heroine are really good, but some basic settings are contradictory at every turn, which is hard to ignore. Moreover, the attempt to make the heroine beautiful and charming as soon as possible also makes me feel uncomfortable.

I feel like the article could write more about the heroine's weight loss. Don't keep making money in the early stage. I feel that if I reduce my figure first, there won't be so many irritating gods who get angry when they call others fat. Also, if the heroine is so rich, why doesn't she just go for liposuction? Yan Ning's husband and mistress are very speechless and feel like they are mentally ill. Anyway, overall, I want the heroine to lose weight quickly. I won't be ridiculed at work in the future. And if she were thinner, the three men behind might be nicer to the heroine, at least the revenge wouldn't be so terrible. Seeing other people mocking me there, it really bothers me that I have nothing to do all day, why are these people?

There is a slight flaw in the plot of the heroine's weight loss, but the overall impact is not big. The heroine has a very clear mind. She will not be wronged when something happens and she will directly take revenge on the spot. She is also very capable and looks good! Update soon!

Update quickly, quickly, ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! I want to see Ꙩ⌵Ꙩ so fast!!!!!! 🥹

Nice

The author's writing is very delicate and I don't have any bad impressions of the characters (except for Jin Lan). This is also the most interesting novel I have found in a long time.

It's very smooth, the plot is implemented normally, everything is reasonable, and it's supportable😋

Why hasn't the author updated it yet?

I support the author a lot. I really like watching this kind of plot. I must update it soon.