Immortal Jade Dust

At first I thought it was good, at least it wasn't like other novels where the main character cheats and upgrades by leaps and bounds. But instead of getting more boring, when we read Xiuzhen, we want to see endless magic weapons, magical arts, and the main character's grudges, brotherhood, and the like. It's not boring stuff like watching you make repetitive things every day.

I can say that This book was several years ago But He is a book written by a great god Just look at it this way It must have been very remarkable at that time Novels have developed rapidly in recent years But you use this year's concepts to see what happened several years ago It's no less than using future technology to look at the tools used by ancient humans This is the first novel I read It can also be said that it was the first one I watched in my entire career. He may have an impression plus But it's more than that Such as those descriptions of life What I'm referring to here is Refining elixirs, forging weapons, drawing talismans This is much better than the current novels I really can't say it anymore Alas You figure it out!

It was well written before. It gets more and more boring later on. Although the creativity of your novel is good, it feels like you are a bit perfunctory later on. Although the author may have tried his best to write it. If this book can be rewritten later, I hope the author can make it more exciting. At the very least, there should be a female protagonist. Although there is a female protagonist in the middle. But it can't be counted as the heroine. Overall, this book is good. It is recommended to take a look.

The writing was okay at the beginning, but when it comes to his parents, it is a failure. He can advance so quickly without spiritual roots and take elixirs. Those families who don't have golden elixirs and leave Yuanying are worse than dogs. Why should the sect only accept those with spiritual roots?

What a piece of garbage! So many women, but in the end there is still one virgin! Maybe this is the author's own life

The first hundred chapters of this book were okay, but after reading it, I doubted my life. Damn, practice qi to explode, fight Lingji, and even have the golden elixir. I really doubt that I need my parents if my life is okay? The description is not very good, and the gap in practice is really confusing. When someone asks you who you are, you just say, it's really weird. The elders of the Golden Core Stage are jealous of more than 10,000 low-grade spiritual stones. Who are you kidding? I really don't want to see the back of it

Obviously these books are better, so why does my sister like to read time travel and the like? Don't understand

Why spend so much space writing about the protagonist's parents?

There are major problems with the character design and main thread, and the writing style is average and bland; the first and middle parts are mainly simple and repetitive lists to make up the word count, while the second part is mainly unfinished. Overall, it is very rare that this work can be completed at the literary level of primary and secondary school students.

Fire Dragon Valley, when you first enter, you need a Nascent Soul and dozens of golden elixirs to work together to break the ban before you can enter. Later, one person came out and the other came in. What the hell?