School Belle, Don't Run Away! the Last Time!

I saw the AI ​​drama of this article on Douyin. I thought it was very interesting. I looked forward to the follow-up, so I watched it here. Unexpectedly, I couldn't stop. I read it all in one night. I have read a lot of novels recently, but some of them just stopped reading after a few chapters. I didn't expect this novel to be so interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard and look forward to the follow-up.

The novel has certain adjustments. The timeline at the beginning is when the senior year of high school is about to graduate, and later it is adjusted to the beginning of the senior year of high school, so now it has written more than 170 chapters, and it is still in the senior year of high school. This leads to a lot of descriptions of classes in the text. Most of the content takes place in school, mainly some interesting things between classes and sports games. Some things outside of school are relatively dull and a bit watery. The protagonist's way of making money is mainly through writing, but there is really no need to use the articles written by the protagonist to make up the word count. Occasionally, a little is okay, but when the protagonist writes a novel, just deduct some from it to make up the word count, which is really too much. The novel written by the protagonist in the novel is a mystery novel. The author insists on writing the kind of novel written by the protagonist into his own novel. The author's own novel is a campus youth literary belt system, which is equivalent to forcing readers to read part of the mystery novel when reading campus youth novels. Anyway, it gives me the feeling that I am separated by a small school. You are reading another novel, because you have copied too many of the reasoning essays written by the protagonist in your own novel. In fact, if the protagonist has a system, the author can just go over it in one go and give a good result, because the system can explain many problems such as getting angry and making money, such as drinking water. Then there is the emotional line of the protagonist. The protagonist is a straight man and the two female protagonists. Apart from studying well, they basically know nothing about relationships. They can't even tell whether they like the protagonist or not. The era is not explained in the article, but it is not a different world. Even in the early 00s, it is still easy for the 18-year-old female protagonist to tell whether she likes a boy. To say the least, even if he can't tell, he is still at that age. When you are most eager to fall in love, as long as a man and a woman have a good impression, it is easy to think this way, but neither the male protagonist nor the two female protagonists have this idea. It gives the impression that the male protagonist is a straight man, and the two female protagonists are confused and unsure of their feelings for the male protagonist, but they will subconsciously be jealous and want to possess them, without even realizing it. Jealousy and possessiveness are combined with a good impression, and you can talk about the aspect of liking. This has also resulted in the relationship between the male protagonist and the two female protagonists progressing very slowly. It currently has more than 170 chapters and is still in the third year of high school. According to the current situation, when the male and female protagonists decide on the relationship between boyfriend and girlfriend, it may have to be written to about 300 chapters. And because I have been copying the mystery essays written by the protagonists of the novel, it is considered that the emotional line is advancing slowly. Let's just pay it back. The atmosphere created between the male and female protagonists is quite good, and the campus atmosphere is also very good. However, if you really rely on these two selling points to write 300 chapters, the progress will be too slow, and it will always be floundering. In addition, the male protagonist is a straight man, and the two female protagonists cannot position themselves. As a multi-female protagonist, it is very frustrating and tiring to read. In terms of the atmosphere created in the book so far, it would be better to write a single female protagonist, the kind that ranges from school uniforms to wedding dresses. Summary: Youth Campus Literature Plus System, the system is not outstanding. The youthful campus atmosphere is okay, but having multiple female protagonists ruins this point. As a multi-female protagonist, neither the female protagonist nor the male protagonist can take the initiative to advance the emotional line, resulting in extremely slow progress and a headache for viewers. Including reasoning essays in this book does not highlight the characteristics of this book and inflates the number of words. This book is quite complex. It is said to be a systematic novel, but the system is not outstanding. It is said to be a youth campus novel and systematic, but it also has multiple female protagonists. It is said to be a multi-female protagonist novel, but it cannot advance the emotional line. It covers a wide range, but by coincidence, one article is deducted from the other, and the book just happens to be stuck.

How can I put it this way? I also want to write a novel. This article deserves a good review. The author added many short goals during the writing process (I feel like I can't do it). It's not endless fun to know what the protagonist is going to do. It increases the conflict between the heroine and the hero. It seems real and sweet. Anyway, I think this novel is the second best-written novel among all the novels I have read (the above opinions are purely personal)

I haven't watched anything like this for a long time since I graduated from junior high school, and I took another bite of candy today. Come on author, I will always support you. *^_^*

This book is very beautifully written and I highly recommend everyone to read it.

After reading it, I felt that Nangong Xue felt a little bit yandere 🤓🤓But I still hope that Li Qingfeng and Yu Younan can be together in the end🤠

The characters of the first and second female characters are pretty good, but the love story is too complicated and slow. It's a headache to force an unnecessary third female character into the story, and it's not very comfortable to watch. The kiss at the doorstep is especially a failure. It adds illogical and unnecessary scenes in order to advance the plot. 🙂 If you don't want to write a systematic article, just simply have a For plug-ins, many places can be covered in one go. If you want to write a love story, you should develop the story line of the heroine. If you want to write more than one person, I personally think that the first and second female characters are enough. If you eat everything, the brainless stallion story will be ugly. Many people come here to watch the AI short dramas on Douyin. I can only say that I hope I can grasp this wave of traffic.

It's very good-looking, and it seems to have multiple female protagonists so far. It's very good to drink, and it's so sweet, so sweet! ! ! ! 😍😍Highly recommended! !

The rhythm of the plot is consistent, the female protagonist and male protagonist are very normal, much better than those green tea ones

The squad leader who liked to find faults and report others later stopped him. I didn't understand why I was being isolated. The first two heroines are okay, as long as they don't end up with the ambiguity and then don't settle it, it's a good story line. Originally, the system text forced interaction with the heroine, and I had already ignored these issues. A strict disciplinarian can leave her daughter alone in your house. A young lady kissed you within a few days. These are poisonous points that can be seen without thinking. The female mistress is a disgusting person.