Peasant Girl's Beloved Concubine Through Time Travel

At the beginning, the plot was quite good, but later I felt it was not good to read. The ending was also very ordinary, similar to ordinary time-travel dramas and time-travel novels. However, as the editor's first novel, it is already very good. I hope that the editor can make the plot setting file ups and downs, making people unexpected and leaving an endless aftertaste. I believe that the author's future writing path will become smoother and smoother, and his writing level will be improved to a higher level.

Give the person who harmed you a chance, why not kill him at once? The plot is old-fashioned, either disfigured or frustrated, there is nothing else to write about, there are too many typos, and sometimes the wrong names are given.

I came to read the book review before I read it. They all say it's a palace fight I don't really like palace fighting. I like people who can move their hands but never use their mouths. Simply But it doesn't mean. I will give a negative review After all, writing novels is not easy. Will still give good reviews Don't spray if you don't like it thank you

When I saw Ye Jing giving Ye Mei 5,000 taels for a dowry, I didn't want to watch it. The second brother harmed his children again and again, sold his eldest daughter, sold his second daughter, and kidnapped the heroine. He actually spent so much money on a dowry for his enemy, and the money was earned by the heroine. Why is he so big-faced, don't you feel guilty? It's so fucking ironic and heartless, I was so angry that I abandoned the article.

When I saw 222, I didn't want to watch it anymore. The heroine is so capable and role-playing. Why don't you go to the battlefield where the hero was disfigured? Are you talking about the fact that the heroine also has a problem with her IQ? When you see the hero reporting to a woman, you won't think about the eyebrow medicine?

It's really ugly. The heroine's IQ is too low and she only knows how to use modern technology! Then, everyone loves it, and then the family is a big family, with amnesia! Every counterattack is cheating! So cliche

Overall, it looks good. In the middle part, the male protagonist is disfigured, and the female protagonist concludes that he is cheating on him. This is very embarrassing, after all, the emotional line laid out before is very stable. There are a bit too many emotional lines for other people in the book, and the characters are a bit messy. Many of the relationships between people are based on love at first sight, which is a bit exaggerated. But as a time-travel novel that you can read when you have nothing to do, it is still very interesting. Come on, author!

From the time Ye Jing gave Ye Mei five thousand taels of dowry money, after a while I felt that the novel was useless. Giving money to an enemy who repeatedly harmed his child was still money earned by the child, just like a father stabbing his child in the back. The plot becomes more and more useless later on, the heroine has no ability at all, she becomes more and more pretentious and has no brains.

I want to say something. I haven't read many chapters. You said that someone saw you urinating and you asked someone to come out. Is this normal? Usually, don't you just leave quickly? Well, when others come out, you dress rich or noble. You have no power and you are still a farm girl. Who gave you the courage to argue with others? Others did not provoke you but coughed to remind you. You even caught up and you were drunk! The writing is so illogical!

I just want to say that the emperor is still here, but the queen always calls herself Aijia. That was the title she used after the emperor died and was promoted to the queen mother. The story is too cliche.