Cultivating Immortality in Old Age, Invincible Through Eternity

I have read some parts and my evaluation is average. After entering the world of immortality, it is still a classic and cliché because some small actions make others feel embarrassed. After the incident, I hate the protagonist and ask my younger brother to solve the protagonist. The timeline is a bit confusing. At first, he was fooled by the protagonist and said that his brother would come back three months later. The result was stunned for a long time. The person who was ripped off the tiger's skin came back seriously injured and was on the verge of death. It took a few days for the protagonist to take the initiative to go down the mountain before looking for trouble. He would always stay squatting because he was afraid of being passed down. Wen, I didn't expect that a small villain in the early stage could delay for so long. Another point is that even if the protagonist is a hundred years old and lacks energy and blood, etc., The slowdown in cultivation speed cannot be compared with those of a few pseudo-spiritual roots. As a result, it is revealed that those who are at the first level of Qi refining can be suspected of having eaten treasures from heaven and earth or possessing exotic treasures. If someone who has been able to sense Qi for half a year with a fake spiritual root and has reached the third level of Qi refining even if there is a "suspected" foundation-building brother behind him, shouldn't he be even more suspicious?

This is one of my favorite novels I have ever read. I really like reading it. I hope the author won't finish it later and write it well. Currently, I think it is better than Xian Nidu. Come on, author, it's okay if you write slowly. I'll read a little bit a day, just don't finish it.

It's beautiful, not overwhelming, and unsatisfyingly frustrating. I finished reading it in one go. Please give the author a big boost and keep updating more!

Basically it's good, at least it can make people keep reading. It beats 7 Cats' many novels.

It's simple and unpretentious, and it looks okay. I'll update it if I forget the author.

The author comes out to make a fuss

The writing is humorous, good!

During a life-and-death fight, we always stop to chat. Shouldn't it be that you and I are trying to kill each other by any means necessary?

The structure and plot of this novel are ingenious and unique among 7 cats. It is a pity that such a good structure is good at first, but as it goes on, it becomes more and more constrained. Inexplicably, this doesn't work, this doesn't work, and it imposes some inconsistent rules for itself, which makes the plot more and more crooked and narrow. Examples 1 and 2: For example, one particularly inconsistent point is that each sect tries every means to prevent outsiders from knowing its own martial arts, because once they know it, they will come up with moves to restrain the martial arts. Wouldn't that eliminate your sect? Therefore, it is impossible for every sect to give out a paper copy of the exercises to everyone, but the author, at the beginning, the male protagonist just killed some people outside and got so many exercises from their storage bags? For example, "Thunder Breathing Technique", "Aoki Immortality Technique", "Spirit Devouring Poison Sutra", "Poison Talisman", "Yin Sha Palm", "Ink Smoke Escape" and "Xuanyou Secret Realm Summary". There are also some powerful skills of the Demon Sect. These skills are so powerful. The male protagonist relies on these skills to kill so many enemies who are more advanced than him! Would other sects be so stupid? So stupid that they wouldn't think that if their disciples were caught by outsiders, wouldn't these skills be leaked? Therefore, every sect disciple who wants to practice the skills must go to his own sect's library to choose and directly enter them into his mind. It is impossible to be stupid enough to let disciples with uneven cultivation take their own sect's paper skills out and about! Another huge bug is that the land of Nanzhou where the male protagonist is located belongs to the low-level world of immortal cultivation. You, the author, let various forces from the Zhongtian Domain come to the low-level immortal cultivation area of ​​the male protagonist to kill and set fire to rob resources. Under normal circumstances, the male protagonist is simply vulnerable and has been wiped out by them long ago. And now there are still so many sects and disciples on the male protagonist's side? Author, let me see how you justify this UBUG! And the male protagonist can pick up so many exercises according to your author's writing, so why didn't the male protagonist's own sect elders pick up a good exercise? For example, the male protagonist of "Aoki Longevity Kung", which can speed up wound healing, did not get the sect that protects him to practice for everyone? At least during the battle, everyone can speed up their own repairs?

The more I write, the less interesting it becomes