Heavenly Curse

Hi, dear book friends, why this article is messed up is because the author is still a junior high school student. Why do I know, because he is my deskmate, hehe, now, he is writing a novel manuscript, and may continue this article.

This book is really well written. It also describes the life of the protagonist Mu Yi very wonderfully. The ending is also very good. I have been reading this book. Thank you to the author for bringing me spiritual food. I will continue to pay attention to you.

After reading this book, let me share my thoughts. There are quite a lot of typos in the book, especially the names, and the names of the protagonists, not only Ji Yun, but also Zhang Yi and NetEase. Sometimes I read it in a daze. Then when the protagonist arrives in the underworld, the realm of practitioners changes. What is the realm of kings, gods, semi-saints, quasi-emperors = holy masters, great emperors, eternal emperors, pseudo-emperors? Each level of immortality and immortality is divided into small achievement, great achievement, and perfection. Once I reach the ninth level, my head is almost numb. Then every time the protagonist fights, he either crushes others or others are stronger than him. Then there is always a lot of nonsense repeated. Although the protagonist's realm has not reached any level, his strength has reached or is already there. We have touched the threshold of something, there are so many words like this, and there is also the scene at the end where the evil Buddha says he owes Ancestor Styx, but he does not say why. There is also the village chief of Jiangjia Village in Liangjie Mountain who does not say anything about his origins. There is also the Blood King who appears behind the little girl and Jiang Xiaoyu and does not explain clearly what changes he has made. There is also the little heaven in Longhu Mountain. Shi Na didn't say much about the existence of Huang Fei until later, and the ending was as simple as saying Nian Nuer asked others if they had seen her brother. It was a bit unfinished and did not explain clearly. It only talked about the male protagonist's life, but did not tell more information about Nian Nuer's father. The same is true for Shuiyuezhu. Alas, he dug so many holes but didn't fill them in.

Zhang Yi, I can't bear it anymore, NetEase, you've gone too far 😂

The three views of the protagonist are disgusting. The feud with Hei Peng, killing and destroying the ancestral land, is enough. He is still pretending to be a being who was obviously tortured and killed by the ancestor. The ancestor who was forced to help refine the ancestral land, and then offer his remains? Is this ancestor's state of mind afraid that he will transcend the three realms and no longer be part of the five elements? People have tortured and killed your ancestors for eighteen generations, and you are still not angry at all. The halo of the protagonist is too obvious! Bad review

It was a good book, but the ending was a bit disappointing

Things in the Underworld are written very colorfully and have historical evidence. Although it is fantasy, it can still give people credibility and readability. But the underworld human race and others were inexplicably introduced, and it was lengthy, complicated, and lacked continuity with the previous ones. The ending is even more baffling.

Say an important thing three times: It's a good thing to understand it, but don't blame your life if you don't understand it. An ending worthy of admiration, a process worthy of having, and a chapter worthy of sealing memories. Realize it well and don't ask why! You are not the author I feel like "It's so good!"

Although the ending is a little bad, overall, it is very interesting. I used to read novels that would get annoying halfway through and make me not want to read them, but this one really attracted me and kept me reading from beginning to end.

The novel is very vague from beginning to end, with no thrilling plot and a poor sense of immersion. I will forget it after reading the whole article.