Ancient Martial Arts King in the City

The plots in the first chapters were very well written, but when it came to reincarnation in another world, the plot started to feel confusing and long-winded. The plot could be described in one chapter, but it took two or three chapters. However, the story line of subsequent reincarnations became more and more confusing, and each reincarnation was particularly awkward in time travel, and the number of typos increased significantly, which made me wonder if several novels were pieced together, and the main character's name was changed to Su Bei. Finally, I saw a confused look, where are the people on earth? What about people like Liu Hanyan, Zhou Man, Nangong Jin, Jiang Yinyin, and Jiang Linlin? Isn't Su Bei the God Emperor? Has reincarnation been successful? I can only use one word to describe it: confused.

The plot of this book before Chapter 1814 is still very attractive. The second reincarnation of the God Emperor after the failure of the God Emperor's reincarnation in the Heart of the Sky Mirror should continue his reincarnation successfully. That is, Su Bei takes Ya Yi and successfully reincarnates back to the God Realm, and Ya Yi enters the world of Grandpa Ya Yi and becomes a strong man. Invincible, and then return to the earth together, seal the gate of the world with Zhu Jiuyin, and hold weddings for Nangong Jing, Bai Huafan, and Liu Hanyan (but the endings of the key characters of Liu Hanxue and Xiao Husu must be added in place). Such a finale can be perfect for the ancient martial arts king in the city! (I suggest putting the part from 1815 to the finale in Zero One, because I don't think this part has any connection with the part before 1814. I hope the author can use the previous thinking perspective to complete the book)

This book is very fascinating at the beginning, but as you go to the end, it becomes a mess from the beginning of the reincarnation. It is made up and made up randomly. The protagonist Su Bei becomes Xu Chuan. The more you read, the more angry you become. The first part is a good review, and the second part is a negative review.

This book is rubbish. The more you look at it, the more disgusting it becomes. I hope that books like Platform will not be shown off and waste readers' time.

I personally like this book better, but I don't understand why Su Bei became Xu Chuan in the end. The plot in the middle is ups and downs. The title of the novel is "The King of Ancient Martial Arts in the City", but why there is a different world, I don't understand. The title of your novel has little to do with this different world, and your plot has nothing to do with the King of Soldiers. I followed it from the first chapter to the last chapter. Shouldn't the heroine be Liu Hanyan, Zhou Man and the others? But why was Wen Yirou the one who finally married Su Bei? There were many typos in the middle, and the plot was not very logical. In general, if you change the title of the book and the plot is not so long-winded and illogical, the book will still be quite good.

To be honest, after Po Di entered reincarnation, it became a different book, completely incomprehensible.

There are too many nonsense words and typos in the article. Even the names of the characters are misspelled. The chapters in the middle are written just to make up the word count. It is really substandard. I suggest that such a poor novel be removed from the shelves, otherwise it will affect the loss of readers on the platform. It is really rubbish.

To be honest, after entering the reincarnation, it has nothing to do with the novel "The King of Soldiers". This is another kind of story. I hope the author can distinguish who is the protagonist when he writes this kind of novel in the future. The first part is fine, but the second part is really messy. After becoming the emperor, he married Liu Hanyan. Isn't it good? Can't it be completed directly after the marriage?

I just watched the first section and there are no comments!

How many Subei are there? What nonsense. One Su Bei was not finished, but another Su Bei came out. One plot was not finished, but another inexplicable plot came out. When you come out, come out, and connect with the people above. It just makes it look like another fucking story. I have been watching it patiently. I really can't stand it anymore.