Rebirth of the Strongest Abandoned Young Master

This is the first novel written by my friend. He is just a high school student. Emmm, I hope you don't criticize it too harshly @(——--)@

Why do some people disappear later on? For example, the protagonist's first love stayed in the mountain after being saved by the protagonist. She appeared in the beginning, but disappeared later, and the one who was with her is still there.

A good novel, worth reading, five-star praise!

I forced myself to read dozens of chapters, but it became more and more boring. The author's characterization is too poor, it's really rubbish. The first one is Xu. The protagonist and his sister-in-law got together. Although they were framed, this scene should not have happened. It is a taboo to break the impression when entering the game. Breaking ethics is not innovation, but shooting oneself in the foot. In addition, the protagonist can sense that she has been drugged. Xu should also know that she has been drugged. Why didn't she say it clearly? Doesn't she hate the culprit? Shouldn't this happen to cause a mental breakdown? Why can she still go to class? The protagonist is also inhumane, holding him in his arms and feeding him chicken soup? The author is full of lust. The second one is my cousin. In order to force the drama, give the protagonist a blind date to show that you are very creative? In fact, it was superfluous and unnecessary. Why didn't she ask the protagonist what he meant? The third one is Ye Li. Does the protagonist have anything to do with her? Just to force the drama and make her talk non-stop? Is it her turn to speak? The fourth one is the Zhang family. What kind of monsters are they? If you are kicked out of the house, you are breaking away from the relationship, and you want the protagonist to die? The fifth one is Yuan Ao. After reading dozens of chapters, I have forgotten who he is. Let's not talk about anything else. Character characterization is very important. The characterization of this character is very failed, which completely destroys the artistic conception of the book and has no perception at all.

Even the Immortal Lord! He didn't fight back when he was belittled in various ways, he didn't take action until the end, he was still hot-blooded and rubbish. . .

Is this the end of 9? It's over before you become an immortal, and it's gone after you've seen it halfway.

After reading 800 chapters, I feel more and more like this novel is a suture monster. Some of the plots, concepts, and item designs can easily be seen in other novels. The part about the fire domain is exactly the same as "Shading the Sky". Even the idea of using a cauldron to hold fire cannot be blamed on me because I thought it was copied. It is indeed too similar. Of course, there are only so many things that can be written in online novels. So many authors have been writing for so many years. It is normal that there is nothing very new. I hope the author will continue to work hard to write in his own style.

The writing is good, the overall feel is good, the ending is a bit rushed.

Is the school just a school? There is also a sect.

Is the character Ye Li written to be disgusting?