King of the Northern Frontier: From Refugee Boy to Demon Slayer

I came in because the rating was so high. It started really well, and I gave it a lot of good reviews. But as the plot develops, it becomes an endless battle, and the writing is extremely detailed. The more you read, the more tired you become! It also involves some mysterious things, which makes me feel uncomfortable. Give up reluctantly.

This is either AI or the author is a high school student. After reading the first two chapters, my three views were shattered. There are people who are escaping from the desert like the protagonist and can find food in a small forest. Snakes that are hibernating can come out to bask in the sun. After finding food, these people who are about to starve to death can watch you eat and play.

There is a breath of fresh air in Seven Cats, the logic is very clear, and the characters are well drawn. These forty chapters can be said to be very well written, and subsequent evaluation will have to wait for the later chapters.

Are demons that smart? Does the demon have the patience to lay the foreshadowing? Since the demon can activate the beast tide, your scene is totally different. There are also combined beasts and living zombies. Are you writing about monsters or zombies? Will the wolf sacrifice also drive away corpses? It's ridiculous that a border town needs to be saved by a refugee who has only been in the army for a few days. He has no backup plan at all. A beacon fire is just a few piles of stones and a few wooden boards. It's funny. The wooden gun handle is multi-functional and more durable than all metal. What about coaxing ghosts?

I can't stand it anymore, it's so chaotic. Is this demon slaying? Is this suspense?

Town, a broken door, Chapter 10, 1 bone, Chapter 15, the rest is just drinking and I don't know where to put it. You should rush more when the time comes. The system is so frustrating to write. Are you a male writer or a female writer?

This is written in a weird way, and it seems that I have lost sight of it.

It's pretty good, but it's too depressing.

To be honest, I didn't understand 🤣

It's a bit uncomfortable, it's a bit like a suspense plot. There are monsters but no martial arts. Maybe it's because I haven't watched it enough, but I really don't have the desire to watch it anymore. And I can still find food while escaping. It doesn't matter. Others are starving to death, but I can still obey the rules and not grab it.