A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Beginning with Purifying All Things

First of all, I want to say that the main function of gold finger is to purify rather than upgrade. Then this book is well written. Generally speaking, this book is a thoughtful article. The overall rhythm is moderate. The writing, plot and fighting are all acceptable. Without water, the author can be regarded as a good work if he beats it down steadily.

There is no logic. The sect is about to kill the protagonist, but the protagonist escapes and still tries his best to return to the sect. He feels like he is mocking: Look, you didn't kill me, I'm back in a big way. If you kill me again, I will escape again, and then I will come back openly to mock you. It feels like playing a game. There is no need to consider the threat to life, as long as it is fun to laugh at.

The rhythm is a mess, with only restraint and no uplift. The male protagonist has no subjectivity at all. He even survives by relying on others to survive. Then the conflict becomes even more outrageous and completely female-oriented. It only starts and ends with the male protagonist being defeated. Goldfinger is in vain. I really don't understand why it is written like this?

Be careful, the frowning master in the world of immortality has been unearthed, and you must frown in every chapter.

It's thin and witty. The protagonist of a novel about cultivating immortals lives like a barbarian throughout the whole process. When it's over, everyone seems to want to kill him. The whole novel is written around the hatred between the protagonist and the Jindan Lu family, and sometimes the writing is very inexplicable. I always thought that sects pay attention to rules and interests, even if they are superficial rules. It's obvious that something concerns people's hearts, and the sect will give you an explanation in order to maintain stability. The result is that the truth is not explained, and whoever is awesome has the final say. Then you might as well write about the Demon Sect. That way, at least everyone will enjoy watching it, instead of all the frameworks being used to suppress the protagonist, which will be too frustrating to watch.

The protagonist killed three people from the sect, and there was also a ruthless elder and female disciple who framed him and his friend Fatty. Under such circumstances, he dared to return to the scene of the crime (enter the sect again) a year later. It's not like there are other sects who want to hang themselves from a tree.

Gou Wen, IQ is online, everyone's logic is reasonable, and they can fill in the gaps. It's worth watching.

It's good-looking, the protagonist doesn't lose his wits, is always online, and kills decisively, it's a pure mortal flow, come on!!!

My favorite type, not bad, but not Gou Wen.

The author's concept is very female-centric. The protagonist is hunted down all the way, and no one pursues the killer. If he kills someone in reverse, he will be held accountable. For example, those two handyman bullies were killed at the beginning. They killed people at will and no one held them accountable. The Lu family has emptied the Alchemy Palace and no one is holding anyone accountable. The sect leader and the palace master are all just soy sauce. The Law Enforcement Hall does not report its work to the sect leader, and has all taken refuge with the Lu family. Especially when looking at the promotion of the protagonist to elder, it is even more outrageous. Elder Lu can overturn the decisions of other elders by himself, which is even better than the clan leader. Your Lu family is so powerful, why do you want to covet those three melons and two dates? The following plot is even more female-centric. Do you have to agree to the marriage arranged by the master? If you don't agree, it's against the religious rules? Okay, let me ask you about the setting of the world of immortality. The male protagonist can refine the top level 3 alchemy pills, and the female protagonist is also the first in the level 3 alchemy competition. So far, the 4th level alchemist is the highest level in the plot. The respective sects do not hold it up like treasures. Various punishments, including being returned to the ice cave for ten years. The female protagonist leaves the sect on the spot. The sect is short of a top alchemy master seedling. How will the master of the Luoxia Sect treat the old woman? How powerful is the Xiao family worth fawning over? Even a few golden elixir sects cannot be moved, this is called being powerful! In short, the Lu family could clearly establish their own sect, but they sent their legitimate daughter to serve as a deacon in a small sect. . . . . . For comparison, the unpopular prince holds 80% of the elite of the empire. After conquering the capital, the Queen apologized and immediately withdrew her troops. . . . . .