The Suitors of the Charming Heroine Have All Become My Subordinates

The characters are really well created. I thought it would be the same as the others I watched before, but it was not like this. For example, Mico's mother, I really couldn't help crying when I saw her coming out to defend Mico. Although she always embarrasses her children and is very marketable, she will still defend her children without hesitation.

It's rare to see something this good. I chased more than a hundred pictures in one go and almost tied it, but I still couldn't bear to part with it. It feels so good, it shouldn't be due to this flow. I haven't read too many books on Qimao. Some of them are not as interesting as this book and they all have high traffic. There is something I don't quite understand. The heroine has a very distinct and touching personality. I can't see the direction of the rest of the article at the moment, but it's quite exciting. When the author described the heroine and her mother, I even cried. Maybe my tears were low hehe. This complex mother-daughter relationship is described very delicately. I also feel very sorry for the heroine and feel that it is very difficult for her. The male protagonist currently feels that Lu is okay. To be honest, I feel that the "male protagonists" are also very pitiful, and they will have some inexplicable feelings when they are disturbed by the so-called "female protagonists". I'm looking forward to it now. It's been a long time since I've written such a long comment. Hehe, the copy editor is a bit rusty.

Not enough

The more I look at it, the more I get excited! Please let Jiang Xuchen be the male lead! I've locked this pair in!

The novelty of this book's story touched my heart.

The original "heroine" had too many highlights, and one after another was solved. In order to highlight the twist, the real heroine suffered a lot, and the male protagonist in it also spared no effort to coenzyme. In short, after reading more than a hundred chapters, I still can't stand it anymore. It's very tiring and frustrating.

Overall it's quite interesting, but each chapter is so short that it's not enough to read! ! !

I thought it was a counterattack on Shuangwen, but it turned out that I kept adding background and backstage to the original heroine.

Does the author hate the heroine? I didn't expect that you arranged for the heroine to be ugly and arrange a top-notch family for him. From the beginning to the present, the heroine has been reaping the bonus of appearance and has been bullying the heroine. You have never thought that you would shape the heroine's family environment in this way. Her mother will always be a highlight. But after I read the entire article, your writing is not enough to support you to perfect this highlight. The article has always been based on looks. Whoever has good looks will fall in love with the male protagonist. Everyone has no brains and is dominated by looks. The article has reached the 86th chapter. The novel is very refreshing. The logic of the novel is average. It can be seen that the author wants to write a lot. But his writing style is not enough to support him to write such a huge article. I want to write a counterattack novel, but the plot is too slow. I have read the 86th chapter and I am still abusing the heroine. The point of satisfaction is minimal. First: It is also logically contradictory. The scene where you meet the third male protagonist. The male protagonist No. 3 Accurately pointed out the ulterior motives of the female protagonist, but the female protagonist smoothed it over with "I'm here just for you." Who has encountered an illegitimate fan who chased her home and harassed her grandma, and could still enjoy being friends with this illegitimate fan at home. The logic of these two points is inconsistent. It can be seen that the author wanted to write that the male protagonist No. 3 Was difficult to deal with, but he was unable to write a self-consistent logic. The reason why the male protagonist No. 3 Bullied the female protagonist was simplified. There will be no such nc logic problems later. This paragraph is very embarrassing. I can't believe that this is already a novel in 2026. Second: The author wants to write about the conflicting family environment of East Asians and the love of parents. The same problem is that his writing style is not enough to support him to write so much. It is originally a refreshing novel. If it is not refreshing enough, it is better to add an annoying mother to the heroine. What is the role of the mother here to be bad but not completely bad or good but not completely good in Shuangwen novels? Of course, I'm not against writing cool novels. It's just that when your writing logic is immature, writing too much will be counterproductive. Third: Where there should be logic, you write without brains. Where you can enjoy it, where you don't need to use brains, you have to start to follow logic, which causes the plot to be a bit draggy. Repeatedly deal with a conflict back and forth at one point. Watching the heroine and the heroine talk to each other affectionately as sisters in the manor, I was embarrassed for the onlookers. Fourth: I gave up the article, but I still give you a good review. Because I feel like what I scolded is too much.

The heroine's career and relationship lines are a mess. I feel that the setting itself is disgusting. The heroine needs to please a bunch of inferior men. I barely read the first 200 chapters seriously, and skipped through the next few chapters. I originally thought that there would be a reversal and counterattack in the future that would make the hero unable to climb up. I really can't understand what kind of person the heroine is. I always feel that in the author's writing, the heroine is like a tool. , How does the plot develop? What kind of person is the heroine? She has been competing with the original heroine. At one moment, she is thoughtful and does not trust anyone easily. At another moment, she is sincere and soft, and can be frank with people she has never met. Apart from the system, all past experiences are revealed. At one moment, she is a gentle and kind actress, and at another, she is a noble female bodyguard. I can only say that she is very fragmented, like many independent people being stitched together.