You Wanted Me as a Cultivation Furnace, So Why Am I Proving the Great Dao Through Yin and Yang?

This setting is so amazing. A centenarian old man travels through the world of immortality. He is manipulated by a witch at the beginning, but he holds the opponent's lifeline with his backhand. It's so easy and funny.

Hehuanzong theme. Lao Deng's series of cultivating immortality is very well written, with new ideas, and is very suitable to Ben Deng's taste.

It's really cool, but when the protagonist does certain things, he always portrays the expressions of the supporting characters. Isn't it too clumsy to keep them exactly the same? And he always forgets the previous settings after writing the latter part, and Luo Li can't guess at a glance that he is someone from the past. It took so long to foreshadow that the protagonist can't guess who the person is.

It's pretty good. I like the plot and setting. It's good without any clichés.

There are still people giving gifts here. It's a mess from beginning to end. One moment it will be perfected immediately, and another moment it will only reach level 2. It is in every realm. He is more than a hundred years older than the old man, but he is still called the old man. He often makes mistakes and makes nonsense, and the logic is completely messed up.

The last few chapters have been really well written, and I feel like they are of a high standard!

Pretending to be a pig eating feed

The contrast between the old trees blooming made me laugh.

The logic is so poor that I often forget and change what I wrote before.

Recently, my mother and daughter have been engaged in political cigarette smoking, haha, it's interesting