The Urban Immortal Emperor

The characters in this book are well described, and the battle details are also very good. It is very classic and looks very enjoyable. However, there are many pitfalls that the author has skipped over with very charming writing methods. I hope that when filling in the pitfalls, I can write more ٩(♡㉨♡)۶

Like other novels about urban immortality, it is too long-winded. The dignified Immortal Emperor and Immortal Lord are worried and indecisive. When provoked by mortal ants, they dare not kill. They have to step on their faces before they hit people, but they do not dare to kill. The more they read, the more annoyed they become. As an Immortal Emperor and Immortal Lord, he must kill decisively even if his cultivation level is not there.

Was the heroine eaten?

Are you sure the heroine is still the heroine? She doesn't appear as many times as the apprentice, and she knows how to play. . . . .

This is the first time I've ever seen a book written about the heroine. There's no explanation in more than two thousand chapters. You're the author, NB.

Why are the male protagonist and female protagonist separated for more than two thousand chapters without ever meeting each other?

The more I watch, the angrier I get. The protagonist has no temper at all and talks a lot of nonsense.

That's too long-winded. I read the comments and I'm not the only one saying that. Did the author use these words to make up for the truth?

I think this book is not good to read. To be honest, I have finished reading this novel. It is insulting to my IQ and not interesting. I have read at least dozens of novels, and this early one is really unattractive. I don't know how it was written in the end. Can you write the heroine? In the end, there is even no apprentice. The worldview does not match. This is a major problem. The apprentice's apprentice failed to save him. Instead, he rebuilt the connection again and couldn't match it. He played well with his sister. Suddenly a group of people came and even the forest master did not go to sleep. Why did these people call him forest master? In the end, even the heroine was imposed on him. This has been said. They are people from two worlds. , Why did they appear in the same world in the end? In short, this novel can be read at the beginning, but it is a complete mess at the end.

What are you writing about? Don't you feel it's a bit embarrassing to abandon the heroine like this? It feels like everyone else has been abandoned except for the two apprentices. I guess if the two apprentices weren't still useful, they should have been abandoned long ago. The titles of some chapters are also confusing. It's like an Immortal Emperor. , I feel like it doesn't have any advantages. I felt like throwing up after watching the same plot - either this person provoked him, or another person provoked him. The people written seemed to be bad people, and the only ones who succumbed to the protagonist's force value, what's the point? Is this what we're looking at? As an Immortal Emperor, you don't even have a good way to change the physical limits of the people around you. How incompetent are you? It's not good to train them to enter the world of immortality? I don't have any special skills, so how can I become an Immortal Emperor? And there were a lot of flaws. The protagonist had easily killed two grandmasters before, but then the same plot was played out again by the same group of people. The characters are also a mess and not clear at all. I didn't expect your divine logic of breaking through the Dan Jie again when you were injured. What the hell, I just tolerated the name that appeared inexplicably in the article. The protagonist is such a bad guy. It is common sense for the Immortal Emperor to use some unique skills to defeat the Nascent Soul. Shouldn't he have the hands? Who is this Immortal Emperor? Is the Immortal Emperor able to cross realms because he is a sword cultivator? Do monsters in the early stage of pill formation still need magic weapons to form monsters in the middle stage of pill formation? What a waste. Moreover, there are still people similar to the Immortal Emperor in the demon world, and the world of cultivating immortals has already reached the end of the Dharma era. How awesome! Moreover, two apprentices were taken away, and a video was left. Do you think the other party is a fool, and the other party still explains to you why the apprentice left? You dare to write this kind of plot, and you will have to write it for several years in the future. You are not afraid that your apprentices will all have children. One of them has a constitution and is not in danger for the time being. What about the other one? Why does the other one care about her constitution? If you can control it, control it. Is it possible that you still support her? Author, you are really big-hearted. If you want to find a reason to go to the world of immortality, it makes sense for you to arrange a brother first. I am speechless. You can't handle the details well. I can't stand it anymore.