The Ultimate Little Broker: I Rose to the Top by Posting My Divorce Certificate

Quite good, multiple heroines, love to read, write more, don't always wait an hour

I really like Su Liuli so much. Marry me. Marry me. Write more about the interactions between the two.

The characters are good and well done.

Logic is bad, driving without details

What I wrote later became more and more complicated.

Are you interrupted by phone calls every time you do errands, and your phone won't be on silent? The more you look at it, the more ridiculous it gets.

All three views are destroyed, it's too poisonous

The writing is very vivid and exciting, each link is connected with the other, and each link echoes the other.

It's okay, there are a lot of flaws, but there are also a lot of foreshadowings, you can see if you throw away your brain. Do the authors of some settings forget about it? For example, Satan previously said that six wings will now become eight wings. The earliest Master Wu said that even Satan respects them. According to the current setting, even the two wings can barely do it. And Han Mei's line has not been pushed. Obviously the plot of this line has been told, and Mr. Han has left, but in the end they are just holding hands. There are too many female characters, and more than half of them are gone in just a few strokes, which is a bit watery. The steps to deal with the bad guys are also very clever. Just kill them and they will be gone. The only one that is pretty good is Mr. Shen.

Nice