The Sinister Prince and the Arrogant Concubine

The heroine's character is a bit unable to afford a mercenary, the male protagonist is too weak and incompetent, and there are concubines and concubines who can't help with anything, so he has to rely on the heroine for everything. The process is too slow. The heroine is not decisive enough and is a bit arrogant. The wisdom of modern people has not been developed well.

After reading the beginning, the author's character division is not clear. Is it Wang Er or Wang San who died? Wang Er, Wang San, and Wang San. There are also many language errors in the book.

Is the heroine's character definitely a mercenary? He has to be aggrieved at every turn, be forbearing, kind and generous. Not quite like it

Happy ending

It's too verbose. To solve the problem in one sentence, you have to use one sentence to the left and one sentence to the right.

What the hell? I didn't mean to argue, in fact, what I wanted to see was the kind of three-for-five-for-two solution, where the male protagonist and the female protagonist fight together. What does it mean for the male protagonist to be at home waiting for the female protagonist to come home for dinner every day? It's too weak. And the heroine, it's a bit too much to write about the restaurant or brothel where she goes. Does the business need to be written in such detail? Watching this just feels like a waste of my time, what's the point?

It was okay at first, but the more I watched it, the more I couldn't stand it. There were a lot of bad sentences, the man was too weak, and it was boring.

So pretty

The plot of the palace battle in the novel is a bit draggy, and the author still has a lot of room for improvement. . . 😂