A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Beginning with Cultivating All Five Elements

I originally wanted to read it before commenting, but after thinking about it, I immediately ran out of time to read it. The foreshadowing in the front of this book is really good. There is no routine, but the protagonist slowly practices and refines elixirs. There is no such person with an IQ of 0. The whole article has a more realistic feel. The Juche world view is also constantly improving. It is similar to "One Thought of Eternity". It is a world of immortal cultivation full of fireworks. The protagonist is more similar to Bai Xiaochun of "One Thought of Eternity", but it is not exactly the same. The protagonist struggles in pursuit of strength. Generally speaking, it can be more refined. The protagonist pursues a powerful goal, and the style would be better if it were more humorous. It would be better to have another catchphrase (similar to: Bai Xiaochun: 'Who am I, Bai Xiaochun, afraid of! I want to make alchemy, I want to practice the best elixir. ')ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

The details are described well, but the writing is a bit laggy. In addition, if the character of the supporting character and the change in attitude towards the protagonist can be made more delicate, and the words and deeds can complement each other. Then the look and feel of the whole book will definitely be improved to a higher level. Come on ˙ᵕ˙ᰔ

Author, the author insists on writing, and I am actually secretly reading it. The author likes you.

This mortal-style novel has a complete plot, the self-created Five Elements Guiyuan Gong, the spirit is like the Five Elements Heavenly Man, the counterattack from waste material, and the content is interlocking. It is worth reading for book lovers!

In the blink of an eye, the book has been updated for a whole month. This book is a classic fairy tale, with a relatively slow pace. In order to avoid the overly long foreshadowing of the classic fairy tale, we walked out of the novice village after thirty chapters and started exploring the new map. In fact, like Shen Zui, I am limited by low qualifications. I always feel that my work and life are too different from my expectations, so I put my ideals in novels, hoping to control my own destiny. This is also my original intention of writing a book. I will write it down seriously, just like Shen Zui who was stuck on the third level of the Qi Refining Stage for more than a year, but can still persevere and persevere, so that he can be favored by the five-color glow. Every book friend is my five-color glow. I hope that one day, I can win your favor and write this book into a hit. ——Prosperity every year 2026.3.13

"Mortal Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from the Five Elements Fellow Cultivators" has a novel setting. The protagonist counterattacks with the five elements' waste roots and creates his own Five Elements Guiyuan Gong. The cultivation logic is clear. The plot has a tight rhythm, not only the reality of a mortal cultivating immortality, but also the refreshing point of the integration of the five elements. The emotional line is delicate and it is worth watching.

Great, keep up the good work, there is only one request, please don't mess up.