Something's Off About Me

The first half of the book is quite good. The story framework, plot logic, and writing are all significantly higher than the average level of Qimao. The second half of the book is too mixed and the level is off. Most of the thoughts are on "how to make so many debris more reasonable", and other aspects are lacking.

The theme idea is well written, but there is too little plot at the end. One person speaks two sentences, and then narrates for one or two pages, and then the next person replies and narrates for another two pages. When these two people finish talking, if they tell it in a long paragraph