Reborn in the 1980S: Making a Fortune Hunting Wild Game in the Changbai Mountains

Are you writing it for yourself? After reading it for a long time, you still can't understand what it is you are writing. You are writing it for the public to read, not for your pimple! Dialects can be used, but the reader's feelings must also be considered. Eight out of ten sentences are in dialect. Although I don't know whether they are true or not, I feel like you are lying to me! Maybe I don't read enough!

The food is tasteless, a mouthful of Northeastern dialect is incomprehensible, and the plot is bland.

The book is a good book, the main character is too bragging, anyone who has tried to kill himself several times, still keeps it? It's not like you are incapable of killing the other party. People who survive at the age of 60 still think like young people!

This article is very high-level and an eye-opener for those who like this style. The overall writing is smooth and there is no water in the middle. The beginning doesn't make people get involved quickly, but the more you read, the more interesting it becomes.

Can the author update a few more pictures?

I saw a scene of tiger hunting. The tiger hunting was done in secret, and then before I knew it, a lot of people knew about it. What was even more stupid was that they even hired a forest farm driver to help transport them. With this kind of brain, you still want to make money?

You focus too much on surviving the eagle. Not many people are interested. The first 100 chapters are too slow.