From the Start, the Saintess Broke Off Our Engagement, So Why Is She Crying Now?

Lin Fengmian in "Xianyu Laobai" is so popular that I came in to read it because of this name.

You are the bright star in the sky, shining with charming brilliance; you are the agile fish in the water, making ripples; you are the blooming flower among the flowers, attracting my attention. Quietly, my heart is filled with you!

Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I hope that the women I picked up earlier will also have roles in the back, just don't hide in the gods, or their realms will be improved together. Many books end with a lot of women without even mentioning them. It feels like giving away a girl and then the male protagonist doesn't care about his own woman. It feels very scumbag.

Brothers, I would like to give you a heartfelt advice. When you reach Chapter 231, don't read any more. You will die if you read the rest. I don't know what I wrote. I keep talking in my sleep every day*

When I saw the back part, it was said that the male protagonist was in the late stage of foundation building, and then it was said that the male protagonist was in the early stage of foundation building. It was all nonsense, and it was impossible to read.

First of all, this book is written by at least five people. There is repetition from the seventeenth chapter to more than 300 chapters. Some plots are repeated once or twice, and some plots are repeated five times, which gives people a very mixed feeling. Some people write porn, some write emotional lines, and some people write about cultivating immortals, which is very superficial. The pornographic ones are okay, and those who write emotional lines and cultivating immortals are always superficial. They write the same content repeatedly. It is okay to read it as a miscellaneous book.

Parody

In Chapter 17, I was already at the seventh level of Body Refining, but I only broke through the Foundation Building in Chapter 122. Tell me, is this reasonable?

There is nothing wrong with the overall love story. You look very comfortable. The weird thing is that the hierarchy is not strict. And the main character was changed like crazy. As mentioned earlier, it is already in the advanced stage of foundation building. The last chapter was immediately written in the early stages of foundation building. If you make a typo and understand. But almost all the back. Crazy misspelling. And a lot of logic is bad. The male protagonist thinks he is very smart. The result is that everyone who is offended is offended. No face at all. He is a late-stage base-building anti-counterfeit elixir. It only takes one punch to knock someone down. And there is no physical training. I have always talked about pure Yang physique. Overall the plot was okay. There is really too much to say about logic. The other party will always look down on the male protagonist. And as mentioned in the previous chapter, he established his authority. The next chapter turns to contempt for him again. It feels completely mindless. Do you understand? Falling in love is not bad. Look more carefully. The logic is terrible. The more I look at it, the more outrageous it becomes.

How should I put it? The author is a bit verbose.