There's Something Strange About The Unrivaled Tang Sect

Generally speaking, there are a lot of changes. It is good to have ideas, but if you change too much and it is not finished yet, it will look very fragmented. Moreover, if you change too much, it will easily conflict with the original work. Then it is better to set your own theme.

The writing is good, and the changes are about 70%. In fact, at this level, you can borrow the system to write a separate book. If you want to say that there is a flaw, there is a girl who looks a bit silly. Society is not complicated. What is complicated is people. It is basically ruled out that she has nothing to do with the internal changes of the male protagonist. It can be confirmed after seeing the third soul ring of the male protagonist, so I say that the girl is a flaw. Flaws: Frequent dramas, and then the plot changed a lot later, and some other plots were added. After all, as the local forces strengthened, the strength of the villains must be strengthened. The last problem that can be ignored is that the emotions and demeanor of the characters do not have the same feeling as in the original. The IQ of other people can be strengthened, otherwise it will be a bit white. There are also some minor flaws in the transition that can be ignored.

Very good. So beautiful.