Urban Ghost Stories: I’m the Only Living Person in the Blind-Date Group

Now I see where the Sixth Sister's affair ends. It can be seen from the early stage that the author wanted to write a harem novel where the heroines all have tragic life experiences. The writing style is not bad, and the logic of the first two stories is relatively smooth. But starting from the third sister, I don't know whether the writer changed or the author changed the outline. First of all, the story of the third sister is very inexplicable. There are a lot of things in the past. I initially thought that the third sister was the nun who saved Yunsha, which was quite consistent with my first impression of the third sister (of course, I actually knew it was not the case when I saw that paragraph. I just thought it was a similar image at first). It turned out that the heroine is a sadomasochistic heroine for thousands of years. As the male protagonist, the general is half the enemy of the male protagonist in this book. Later, after the male and female protagonists saw the truth, the general used his last strength to directly delete the memories of the male and female protagonists? What does that mean? Then why did you write a long paragraph earlier? You said that the female protagonist has given up, thought about it, and is willing to be with the male protagonist, or that the female protagonist cannot let go and is willing to help the male protagonist, but she has to continue to wait, which is both reasonable. But the latter is obviously not consistent with the title and tag of this book. Although the former is a bit ruthless, it is more or less logical. I really don't understand that the general directly deleted his memory. Then why did you write such a long plot earlier? Does it mean that the heroine has long been waiting for someone to belong to her, but because of her original love, she gave up and gave it to the hero? I don't think the male protagonist is a rag collector, is he? The author directly portrays the general as a simple loyal and patriotic image, but he is actually taller than he is now. Or the heroine can be a bystander watching the story of the general and another woman, which can also highlight the fairy spirit and independence from the world. Moreover, the latter can not only satisfy the author's little thoughts, but also provide a suitable perspective. If the author is willing, he can also give the general and the woman in my imagination a good ending. At the same time, the heroine will not be in such an inexplicable position as a bystander. Having to carry out such a sadomasochistic relationship, it is difficult not to make people think that the author is guilty of literary youth. Secondly, it started from the third sister, how come the style suddenly changed to stock trading? The male protagonist is a stooge in everything he does, and he has to be a brother to the female protagonist. It's completely different from the tone in the early stage. You have to slowly write the story in the early stage of love. What does it mean to follow Jiu Mei to meet the parents directly, and to have a man and two women sleep together? Is the author the same as before? Book sold? If you want to write about stock trading, you should remove the label of multiple female protagonists. At least the multiple female protagonists here in Qimao means "the male protagonist has romantic relationships with multiple female protagonists." I won't comment on the Sixth Sister section. It's quite satisfactory, with no explosive points. You can guess what is going to be written next. The writing style is not bad. In addition, as soon as the male protagonist left, the eighth sister and the ninth sister went to the nightclub to drink and dance, right? That's very danceable.

I've read too many of Long Aotian's cool novels that use female ghosts as gimmicks. This kind of novel that deeply depicts the emotions of the characters is really moving. I've read more than 20 chapters so far, and my nose has been sore several times.

The emotions are portrayed more delicately and vividly, and the stories are also quite deep.

It's a very average work. The author's writing skills seem to be that of a complete novice. It can be written like this. However, the author can't figure out what the main plot is and can't advance the plot. He relies on some copy plots to make up the numbers. The other is the combat power, which collapses too quickly, so the book cannot be written at all. The third is the heroine in ancient times. The background story is really poisonous. I am too lazy to say anything else. If the author sees it, he can learn how to make an outline. Having a good outline will be much better than now.

Seeing Chapter 102, the third sister has appeared. So far, the protagonist has not made any progress at all. He is stupid, ignorant and incompetent, with no courage, wisdom, calmness, strength or anything like that. It all depends on the author for blessing and all on Mang. Because I am the protagonist, I win, so I am great. It's not that I win because I'm great, so I'm the protagonist. To put it bluntly, you could just change the protagonist to a dog, and there would be no difference.

Starting from the third sister, the story began to fall apart. The early writing was quite good, but it was a bit too high and low. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It took me two days to finish watching it this time. Personally I think it's pretty good. It suits me. I just finished reading it. It's gone.

The needle doesn't prick it, it looks great

I think this book is quite interesting. Netizens who find it interesting can give monthly passes to the author. But why do I feel that the author is very thin-skinned? I see other authors leaving messages asking for monthly passes every once in a while, but I found that the author of this book seems to have not asked for monthly passes yet. I feel that the author could be thicker and leave a message asking for monthly passes after finishing the update every day😬😬😬

Not really pretty