After Turning in the System and Taking Me to the Motherland, I Became the Richest Man

I can't say it's not good-looking, but the whole article makes me feel frustrated. The reason is also very obvious. The heroine is a very tall and noble Madonna. This is not a derogatory sense. The heroine feels that she is responsible for the safety of people all over the world. If someone is not saved, she wants to let herself die. It is very uncomfortable to watch. I don't have that much love, so I feel very baffled when I look at the heroine. Is this necessary? It's hard to persuade the damn ghost. Of course, I can also understand that the author wants to convey the idea of letting the world have more love? Let's just say that this kind of distrust of the police happened once or twice. There have been two precedents of saving others. Actually, no one believes that the dam is about to collapse for the third time. What a stupid plot. There is also the inexplicable possessiveness and emotional line of the male protagonist. Why do you fall in love with someone when you see someone who wants to be stronger and more cunning? After rescuing a few accidents together, you fall in love so much that you want to cut off any possible development of the opposite sex around the female protagonist? Still swearing sovereignty? Are you okay, brother? The heroine is always inexplicable. The wanted criminal was next door. The hero was indifferent and could still say I just want you to finish this bowl of noodles. Is this the occasion where I should say this? The emotional line is really abrupt. There are also technology points that are not redeemable. It feels like they can only be used for system tasks. If you redeem high technology earlier, can you save people better in various accidents? Is it necessary for people to risk their lives to save people every time? Aren't the police human beings? The same goes for the development of genetic medicines. Is there only one research institute in the entire country? Can it only be used to treat diseases? Why can't body enhancement functions be studied simultaneously? Is it reasonable to make the heroine as weak and unable to take care of herself as a little spoiled wife despite knowing that she is important? They say that the heroine is very important, but they don't see how much they attach importance to it. Ordinary people don't know about the little tricks her sister does, and the country can't find out? Just putting such a dangerous factor next to the heroine just to block the plot? The good-looking thing is probably that the country loves it. Other developments are really inexplicable.

I really like this kind of plot. The system is handed over to the country, various prophecies and high-tech are brought to flight, and the first few tasks of the Stalker account established by the heroine in the end are all very meaningful. The full text is very emotional, and my eyes are hot when I read it. Every time the heroine predicts something that needs to be stopped or implemented in advance, It's really annoying to see how people don't cooperate, but everything else is pretty good. I like it.

The plot is good, the writing is good, the sentences are fluent, and there are no typos.

The starting point is good, but the development of this emotional line is very baffling. The heroine fell in love with her sweet wife for no apparent reason, and I didn't want to fall in love with her. If the heroine's early dependence on the hero is just the trust of a minor in an adult, then I have nothing to say, but when she made a decision for herself, she didn't even think about it and immediately looked at the hero. How? Without the male lead, would you lose your backbone? The male protagonist's possessiveness towards the female protagonist is also very inexplicable, and isn't the male protagonist in his 20s? The heroine has just come of age!

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