Jian Lai: Banished Immortal Comes to the World, Marries His Wife Ning Yao at the Beginning

I just want to say one thing, the author, you are writing fan fiction. Everything should be the same as the original work. You don't have to write it. Isn't it good to read the original work? What is fan fiction? You are not writing fan fiction. What kind of money are you here to make?

Not bad, not bad, very good, very good. I don't know how the male protagonist traveled through time, and how he became a disciple of Qi Jingchun after time travel. I hope the author can make up for it in the future. As for the heroine, she is currently confirmed to be Ning Yao. I don't know if it's multiple heroines or single heroine.

Knowing that there are cheats in the plot and not doing anything, then saying that this person is suffering and that person is suffering is really showing me sweaty beans 😅 Just leave the self-moved and self-sensational writing

I hope the heroines are Ruan Xiu and Ning Yao

Um, it's usually a fan story. The protagonist accompanies Chen Ping'an all the way to the end, and then talks about various truths from the original text. I'll say it again. The CP has been changed. It's normal. It's just the same.

Very average

I don't understand what the author is writing. It's inconsistent. Cui Minghuang first appeared and said that he was ordinary-looking, and then later said that people have made people richer and richer than God Yulang. Is he attacking himself?

It's so bad, I couldn't figure out what the author wanted to express after reading it for a long time.

Isn't this just taking the original work and changing it into another one?

I think the creativity and writing style in the early stage and the portrayal of the protagonist are pretty good. In the middle period, I felt that it was a complete copy of the original work, with just a different protagonist. I basically had no desire to continue watching it, so it would be better to read the original work. In the later period, the pureness was just a lump, not for people to see. It feels like the author really ran out of talents in the middle and late stages of the story.