Cautious Cultivation in an Eerie World

It looks pretty good from the beginning, and the imagination is pretty good... The back part feels like the same as the matryoshka dolls, with new scenes and new women. I've seen about a dozen of them halfway through, and the writing is average, and I'm not very good at writing about battles.

I have been a bookworm for many years and read more than a thousand chapters in one go. I thought I should write a few words. The layout of the whole book is grand yet delicate, each link is intertwined, the scenes are changeable yet surprising, there are many characters but no facial expressions, it has a sense of detective work and is fascinating. I am very grateful to the author.

In fact, the writing is okay, but it is really too slow. Chapter 70 has been put on the shelves next door, and I have only practiced Qi for the fourth level. It is not that exciting. Caution is prudent, but I always get seen through, which makes me feel lonely.

It's too long. The logic is not clear. The plot is not obvious. I forget what I have gained. I have lost my cultivation and become a mortal several times. It is better to just write it to death. If you are in danger, come here. The author is simply a masochist.

This book is no less than Immortal Ni, a rare masterpiece that I have seen so far!

The early preparation, expansion and closing are all very average. Long stretches of the plot are like a wheel rolling over and over again. The characterization of the characters is not natural enough and leaves no trace. There is always a feeling of stiffness and vividness. After a certain stage, the author seems to have enlightened and no longer sticks to the clichés. The plot scenes he sets out to lay out begin to have a profound foundation. Hiding the characters in the events will actually It shows more unique qualities. Generally speaking, it is getting more and more exciting. It is a pity that the rating has not increased. The protagonist's unlikable personality may account for a large part. It is both necessary and impossible. This is also a trait in itself, but I always find excuses for myself to complete this task. If you want it, you must be proactive, subjective, and recognize and admit it to avoid being awkward. The original plot is frustrating enough, and people are not satisfied.

The rating is low. Wild donkeys can't eat fine chaff. Rank Seven Cats in the top ten.

The writing is very good, why is the rating so low?

Become an ox and build an immortal, make talismans, refine qi, and make elixirs. The same old template for cultivating immortality. People are also very holy. I was born to have a hard life, and it's boring as hell.

There are Taoist monks and they are recruiting flowers and weeds everywhere. It's boring, this is it, or else it starts with a harem and ends with a harem. You have a wrong outlook on things.