Daoist Master: Starting with Foundation Establishment in Penglai

The beginning of this book is not very good, but the middle part is very good. But I have read Xianxia novels, and the writing in them is very, very good. The later part may have been written too poorly in order to suppress the realm. This small character is divided into 3 chapters, and that small character is divided into 5 chapters. The protagonist's name appears in each chapter. It's boring.

Linyuan's writing is profound, the layout is rigorous, he has a deep understanding of the Buddhist treasury, and he extensively analyzes the complexities of the human heart. His writing style is also concise. The only thing that is not enough is that he has entered the Tao too deeply, has been possessed by demons, and does not distinguish between books and treasury. If you are asked to write a novel, you have written "Tao Zang Huitong" to teach people to cultivate the truth and pass on the Dharma?

The update is not serious, the layout is confusing and repetitive

There is nothing new at all. Logically speaking, as a monk, you should keep a distance from the prisoners. The protagonist keeps saying that he likes to be a pure monk. However, in the end, he does what others say and does it, and he feels that he is not qualified at all. It feels like he is just a mortal thug bodyguard. I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters.

I think this is a relatively new existence in cultivating immortality. There is no crazy pressure state. Just mention it when it needs to be mentioned, and change the map when it needs to be changed. Moreover, thinking outside the box, cheats are limited to those items and magic weapons. Instead, a relatively new approach is used, which is that talent is cheats. It is also a relatively new idea, and there is not much so-called vernacular to downgrade the conversation, unlike some people who only cultivate their cultivation without connotation, and often speak in vernacular or some pretentious quotations. The protagonist is also relatively straightforward in terms of his state of mind. He does whatever he wants. He does not make superficial distinctions between good and evil, and does not even define them. The narrative details are also very good, and there are not many repeated steps. And for traveling around the mortal world from time to time, this is also very good. There is no such thing as a high level and a low level. I still travel without any obvious disconnect. (This is just my subjective opinion, not intended to start a fight.)