Ascension to Sainthood Begins with the Five Animal Frolics

The sea is full of water, it's really too watery. I wrote a hundred and eighty chapters to reach the highest level of martial arts with the help of plug-ins. I don't dare to imagine how watery the plot will be later. To increase the speed by adding a gross plug-in, I might as well write a waste stream.

There is so much nonsense that I can finish it in one sentence, so I have to write a chapter. Various large-scale side descriptions and psychological activities. There's another thing I didn't understand. There's no stallion yet. Why are you writing about all kinds of ambiguous beauties, maids, landlords, princesses, and college girls? What are these fairies for?

The sea has so much water

It's too verbose. I can explain one thing over and over again, write it down over and over again, and I can pass the review.

It's indeed water. But don't feel aggrieved. It's okay to pass the time, it's a good deal. I will tell you a very simple one, and you will know why. Not only did he need more than 100 items to break through, but he was in the Skin Refining Realm. It took nearly 600 photos to complete. Breakthrough gold skin. Of course, he has reached the master level at this time. It means that the product breaks through the third level and needs to be exchanged about 5 times. Then the gold skin was polished. Just say it's cool or not, of course he's pretty good-looking, well, if it's not cool, it's a masterpiece, but if it's not cool, he can't make any money.

The writing idea is not bad, but there are many logical errors, so many that I can't even describe them. I started writing even those who don't write comments.

Too watery. Are you the sea? One-third of each chapter is panel content. If there is no topic, don't write it.

The plot is too bloated, and so is the emotional line. The protagonist has no determination at all. Although strong men attract women, there is no sense of connection at all, and the plot seems hollow.

Trivial and complicated: eliminate the frequent water numbers of various data on the panel, the water numbers of repeated operations and reminders every day, and the water numbers of daily subdivided periods - the plot content is really lacking, but the insights are really good!

I practice over and over again, but I still rely on money to buy supplements to improve my cultivation. I have practiced internal skills and mental methods in vain. I have written so much, but I am still at the ninth level, which is not good.