
Tokyo's Only Hokage
我在东京当火影
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.7M Words
- Genre
- Anime & ACG
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qimao
Synopsis
All-time: Popularity, Must-read votes.
511Chapters
13kPopularity
1.1kReaders
51Must-read votes
8.6Score
22Ratings
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Reader comments 5
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If it can give a happy ending and the general logic can be self-consistent, it is considered a good writing. It is not good if it is not a running account that can be seen at a glance.
I didn't think clearly at the end of writing. Hitting Susanoo with an air-to-air missile can still break it. Not to mention whether it can hit the ground, the AA's small charge and fragments are probably not as good as the Hao Fireball.
It's a bit like "Rebirth of Japan with Naruto", which is my favorite style of writing. Recommended
We are here to see the protagonist, not the mess of supporting characters. After 150 chapters, we are writing branch plots, and the main plot is basically invisible. Sometimes we can't even see where the male protagonist is in 10 chapters. They are all writing plots about various supporting characters, and the male protagonist seems to have disappeared. Looks very annoying
It seems to be very similar to the plot of "Building a God in Tokyo on a Rainy Night" written by this name a long time ago, "With a Knife and No Umbrella", but that one ended up being unfinished. Although this one has a mediocre ending, at least it's still telling, and overall it's OK.